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Woah. That was both scary, and very well writen. Some of that stuff sounds like it came from Slient Hill, and I've never even played a Slient Hill! I love the detials and the use of the music. I really can't wait for more!
facepalm And the last chapter was such an improvement. So what do I begin with? Nothing. There's nothing to say. Same whining of Joshua about him being so tormented. Same trying to make Champagne seem evil. You already told us that he's been killing people left and right hiring hits, what's the point of this? More reason for Joshua to be tormented. For Celestia's sake when are these two weeks going to be finished?!
The nightmare was a mixed bag. Partly interesting and yet partly 'meh'. Sort of anything you'd fine from the common trip through someone's psyche. Please tell me we're going to get back to quality stuff like the last chapter.
I wouldn't be surprised if we don't.