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I really love this.
GOD DAMN IT!!
At some point I should write a VERY LONG comment detailing my thoughts about this. It's so love/hate it's not even funny. But I'm too tired now...
But please, do finish the next chapter. I really want to see how this ends (and watch RD and AJ stuff themselves silly). Feel free to include plenty of details, the previous chapters have been just a tad lacking in the detail department. I mean, we don't even have a good indication of how big RD is. Just 'bigger.'
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Hee hee hee hee ha ha ha ha HA HA HA HA!
Don't you worry, my fine friend! Lemme put it this way......
My goal for this chapter in word count........
..........................
At least.......
30,000! I want this chapter to be fucking EPIC! It's ALLLLL built up to this...... 24 Chapters of the road..... and now we're coming to the destination! And lemme tell you........ this is gonna be H-E-A-V-Y!!!! I'm gonna do what I said I'd do all along... I'm gonna make it so vivid you'll FEEL like you're there!!!!!!!!!
3109059 Good gravy. I am now officially excited.
Do feel free to take your time. Should this chapter be as glorious as you foretell, it will probably override all the little things that have ticked me off.
Details! Sizes! Fullness! I eagerly anticipate the release. Glad you decided to continue.
The spark in Joshua's heart. You've got to be kidding me. This guy gives up and loses hope in every chapter and every chapter he decides to pop back up. Then everyone acts as though he's a hero who graced them by coming back. He's not the most reliable guy, but thank Celestia that the contest is finally coming. We've been waiting for this thing for this entire- Then I look at the other comments and realize that this last chapter was due months ago. I came this far to find a dead end hiatus waiting. You're kidding me.
Well what to say about this chapter? Luna's a jukebox to Joshua's devices, he keeps repeating that Champagne must die, and suddenly I think maybe Champagne's not the only threat here. Whatever. I'm out. This thing is not going to ever get finished and I take some solace in the fact that I don't have to read whatever is coming next.
5322950 Dude, we all have our own writing styles and our own tastes.....
While I'm a little annoyed with some of your comments, I do understand where you're coming from and I respect that you gave some genuine reasons for more of them,
There's 3 I wanna address in particular at least for the moment.
Meowth flying..... Yeah, ok, that's pretty valid. I just kinda winged it on that one.
The clothes making ponies want to screw him..... That one, YOU implied. Remember a couple things, this is their first real experience with a human. Twilight's comment was mainly me adding in a joke.
Joshua's spark....... I'm making an effort actually to STOP doing that, I noticed I did it a lot.
Still you are entitled to your opinions and I appreciate you being well thought out in your responses as opposed to the jerk who put in that dog picture.