• Member Since 12th Jan, 2012
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*This wass for the February Write Off*

Feeling a little bored with the lack of excitement lately in Ponyville, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are only too happy to join Rarity and the others on a cruise to help her deliver a dress to a wealthy client in the hopes of a little fun and relaxation.

Yet relaxation is the last thing in store for them... Even on a luxury cruise, disaster can pop-up in the most unusual ways...

SPECIAL NOTE: This was written for the write-off and even thought it didn't win... I still had a lot of fun writing it, so I'll keep it up here.

But know that this is not canon to the actual saga I'm working on.

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Comments ( 4 )

I didn't actually read this because both of the stories I got are both way to long, and I'm trying to vote on stories that are under 5,000 words.

But how did you get it to be exactly 9,999 words?

Don't actually respond to this because you're supposed to stay anonymous, but I wtf'd

The counter is broken, cause it's actually 9450 words

This was just unbearably stupid and unfunny. Why would they do that to Rarity who had did nothing to them?

I'm sorry you felt that way.

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