Star Whistle is tired of his boring life and is seeking an adventure. When a trip to Baltimare turns up a chance to go sailing across the ocean, he instantly pounces on it. Is this the dream of a lifetime of something completely different?
Due to the other author leaving the herd and having my own interpretation of his characters, I can't really continue this so uh... *shrugs*
Cute.
2261525 ... What part of that is 'cute?'
2264501
I found it okay.
My jaw didn't drop at the prose, but it wasn't bad either. The charcter's okay and the setting seems all right.
I can't give a person a vague compliment?
2264510 Fair enough. I was confused for a moment >.<
Really good keep it up