• Member Since 2nd Jan, 2013
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DitzyDerperellaDoo


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Lighting Dust has always looked up to her grandad. Her grandad and Uncle had raised her, ever since.. the accident.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 11 )

1. There is suppose to be a has in the second to last paragraph :raritywink:
Awww poor lightning dust, I think I've read a comic with the same plot :rainbowderp::applejackconfused::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:
Good job

It says Cloudscale on the first paragraph :raritywink::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:
And it also says eachother and it says wieght instead of weight
But overall it's a great story and has great descriptions keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

You should capitalize, like this. "I wanna be a Wonderbolt... Just like you".
"The Hospital"
"Graves"
"The big willow tree"

awwww:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: poor lightning dust

2244468 My story Is based of the comic where her grandad, a Wonderbolt, has a crash, but I have done some minor changes then what happened in the comic.

2244468 Thanks for noticing! :D and ya, my story is based of the crash of her grandad, but some changes.

2280162
It's a good story I liked it.
P.S. Maybe you want to read my story, "My Day In Ponyville"

Dont worry, why did you have to re-write it?.

2489629 Well computer shut down as soon as I finished :facehoof:

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