Lighting Dust has always looked up to her grandad. Her grandad and Uncle had raised her, ever since.. the accident.
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1. There is suppose to be a has in the second to last paragraph
Awww poor lightning dust, I think I've read a comic with the same plot
Good job
It says Cloudscale on the first paragraph
And it also says eachother and it says wieght instead of weight
But overall it's a great story and has great descriptions keep up the good work
You should capitalize, like this. "I wanna be a Wonderbolt... Just like you".
"The Hospital"
"Graves"
"The big willow tree"
awwww poor lightning dust
awww
2244468 My story Is based of the comic where her grandad, a Wonderbolt, has a crash, but I have done some minor changes then what happened in the comic.
2244468 Thanks for noticing! :D and ya, my story is based of the crash of her grandad, but some changes.
2280162
It's a good story I liked it.
P.S. Maybe you want to read my story, "My Day In Ponyville"
Dont worry, why did you have to re-write it?.
2489629 Well computer shut down as soon as I finished
2492623
Ah, ok.