DitzyDerperellaDoo
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Woah man, is this a fic about the Rahnbow factuary?
Seriously though, you may need an editor and a decent spell check to help you out.
Okay the story is there but 1 the size of your chapters are really unnecissary 2 you could really flesh it out more and 2 it's not written very well you lack any description even for a first person fic. In all fairness it would make more sense to be 3rd person. Basically the idea is go the execution is not good.
Her mother is RD.
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be nice!
2241052 My story is in third person, and you know, I already know it has major spelling issues, I know that. And thank you for actually telling me what you think about my story insted of just hiding behind a mask like a coward.
2241255 Nope, but I'll give you a clue, she is like RD and is a pegasus, oh.. and shes in G1, thanks for being nice
2241020 This story is about how Ditzy, when she was a little filly, was sent to the rainbow factuary, I have never read rainbow factuary, so don't say I stole it. Thanks for telling me, I'm gonna try to fix it and see if someone can help me with it.
Hm...Scoots?
2243034 .... scootz wasn't a G1 pony... but it is a pony like rainbow dash, give ya a clue, PURPLE EYES
2241302 you're welcome :)
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FIREFLY?!
2245999 mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabyeeeeeeeee
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lol okay
why the dislikes?
DUDE! you made derpy look bad D:< SHAME BRO,SHAME >:(
on chapter 3 now...swear to god dude...IF YOU KILL DITZY D:<
yep,your gonna kill ditzy aren't you....you sick JERK!
2888504 IT IS MY JOB TOO MAKE EVERYPONY LOOK BAD
2888543 RAINBOWS
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plz on next chapter,you can let ditzy die,but will you let her ghost take revenge and destroy the rainbow factory with an army of angels >:D
2896844 if you want to see "death" read my Lighting Dust story. "I wanna be a wonderbolt just like you"
2897214 i got a feeling,and its a bad one,im writing a story now......im gonna put you in it.....3 letters back by the way HAVE FUN SOLVING THIS
nevermind your a sick freak and im just kidding,good day you gore loving sicko :D
3287552 In the rainbow factory,where all you're fears and horrors come true
oh god I cannot unread this!
oh god I cannot unread this! why did I even continue reading this!
I like it it may be short but the word usage is really nice.
Get the Ac 130 Gunship fired up we have a factory to levle
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... Crap...