Dash, a young filly from Cloudsdale, lives happily with her father, Silver Cloud, until an unfortunate accident at the weather factory results in her life changing forever. This is the story of how she became the self-proclaimed greatest flier in Equestria.
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Relevant to topic: You might want to cut the description down a bit. You've told us a hell of a lot in that.
Interesting story so far, I'm intrigued as to where it's going! Bring on chapter 2!
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So good.
Too good.
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1670325 What if I told you diabeetus?
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1670358 You're like my personal thread-buddy!
1670362 Well, Kurt is. Sexy Lyra's gotta fill in today since he's at a show.
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Oh my gosh! You are not Regidar! Regidar is ghost Kurt that comes to Fimfiction to haunt all the bronies! WHERE THE BUCK IS YOUR AVATAR PICTURE REGIDAR?
Story going to my read later for now, but I will give the author a thumb up 'cause I am a sick Dash fanboy.
1670371 I can dig some sexy Lyra.
1670381 Kurt's at a show. I'm Sexy Lyra filling in for now.
1670383 Spitfire X Lyra
I can already tell this will be featured by tomorrow.
MOAR PLZ
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I see. Thanks for the info, I tought that my mind was about to blast.
Im watchin you
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Hey guys,
1) Thanks for all the positive feedback. I was really nervous since this is my first fic, like, ever.
2) BRACE YOURSELVES, CHAPTER 2 IS COMING.
3) There is no number 3.
4) About that: I'm going to be pretty busy with school, but I'll try to get updates fairly often.
5) I'm also working on a Discord-themed story, so look out for that.
6) Coming up with names for ponies is SURPRISINGLY HARD.
-OP
1671347 chapter 2, you are needed in the emergency room to look after *insert reader here* while he recovers from shock
IT'S HERE.
I'm frankly shocked at how quickly this is going, but I guess it's just inspiration working its sparkly magic.
But really, DON'T EXPECT IT TO BE THIS FAST ALL THE TIME.
Chapter 2 is a bit shorter. I look forward to your feedback.
So far, so good, I'll keep reading when updated.
my payers have been answered
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I AM YOUR GOD NOW
This is getting interesting......
This is Good
I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
This just might be my new headcanon.
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Mine too.
1670410 Okie Dokie Lokie!
Hey guys,
Chapter 3 is on its way, but I'd appreciate if you'd give this a look. I've got two big research papers due this week, and it seems like all I can do is write stories about cartoon ponies
Rainbooms and roalty much
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Never quite seen anyone take that approach to it before.
Simply wonderful, can't wait for more!
CLIFFHANGED!?!? HOW DARE YOU!!!
I DON'T KNOW WHY I'M LAUGHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIVE MOUSTACHES
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Mwahahahahaha
ERMAHGERD
CHERPTERR FERR
WERT CHERPTEER FER ERMAH GERD!!!!
O ERMA GERG
1. Write a chapter
2. Plot twist
3. Abruptly end chapter
4. ????
5. Profit.
Thank you, Charles Dickens, for creating serialized literature.
New Chapter is up, guys! I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!
Sorry it took a while, been crazy busy. It's a bit longer this time, just couldn't stop, it seems, probably inspired by today's episode. Enjoy.
one of the best dash fics i've ever read!
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so awesome
Finally, I get the chance to read this and, as always, a great chapter. Can' t wait to see more!!
If I hadn't already read A Tale Of Two Luna's and watched you, I would have hit watch! AMAZING! To quote G3 RD, if it's about rainbow's,it's a bout Rainbow Dash!
Chapter 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MOAR
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It's about halfway done. I'm currently concentrating on AToTL because I've sort of got a few more chapters worked out for it.
Yay Surprise who pinkie was gonna be!!!!!!!!!!!
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I just read all of this, and it is a true pity it is on Hiatus. Since so long, too. The story is really sweet and I like your take on Dash's past. I will fav this in the hopes of a continuation one day. Just wanted to let you know how much I love your writing^^