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It's just a normal, boring, cloudy day in the town of Ponyville. AJ is hanging out with Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy is at the spa with Rarity, and Pinkie, once again, is annoying Twilight Sparkle. But when their Elements are put to the test, something extremely unexpected happens that could change Equestria forever. No, I didn't make make the cover art. Nianara or deviantart did! Go check it out!
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My second attempt at a fic. Hope you guys enjoy!
sorry... But I have to go to Ottawa in two hours!
Next up is AJ and RD. No updates till next week
What the hell did I just read? EXPLAIN YOURSELF!
Wait....what?
Interesting...
189306>>189555 just something I made when I was bored... Lol
189803 what do you mean by that?
I know what purgatory is, but what does this have to do with it?
Please comment, you guys! Don't wanna make Fluttershy sad!
Not bad so far, but this is simply the set-up stage so it's understandable that much of it wont make sense plot-wise yet.
The Artwork is The Elements of Harmony by *sapphiregamgee and can be found here:
http://sapphiregamgee.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=elements#/d4mb6ud
this is getting gooood
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Why thank you kind sir!
224929 oh, if you ever need some help I'll be more than happy to help
Well, nice Story so far. Waiting for the next Chapter!
"Yes, Pinkamena, I have all the ingredients in the kitchen."
Huh? Since when does Twilight address Pinkie with her full first name?
"Look, Pie, I'll do it,"
...or address Pinkie by her last name alone?
Although if you are using the "it applies to this fanfic universe" rule that's fine but then the problem becomes lack of consistency. Does she call her one or the other?
Sorry for being so critical. I tend to do that... a lot.
...what.
ok wtf did i just read , i thought it was going to be a alicorn story?
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Oh it will... It will! *evilly laughs*
Say, will it give a new Chapter? I was hoping for a new one.
Update,
Just some tips…
New speaker, new paragraph.
Pretty much what this guy 423213 said…
And… yea.
Um is this story dead?
Is this thing alive? No offense.