Taking place before Twilight’s ascension to the status of alicorn princess, this is the story of an intervention.
An intervention that sets quite a different chain of events into motion. An intervention that sends Twilight and her friends far from home, deep inside a hostile land, with only the agents of a suspicious foreign power to aid them.
Agents executing their final directive.
Sincere thanks to my first editor, who put many hours into getting the first three chapters of this off the ground. Also sincere thanks to my second editor for continuing to serve as a sanity check!
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I'd just like to take the opportunity to thank my pre-reader. Without him, this would be far rougher around the edges. Any major issues are almost certainly down to me refusing to listen to him. Enjoy!
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I like your Luna. YaP did an excellent job pre reading for you, also.
Thanks for the note!! Oh this looks GOOD!! I love the tension that you allow to build very nicely. The characters are all well written and hitting all the right notes. I especially love Rainbow Dash being protective and being put in charge by the Princess! Go Dash!
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Have you ever considered submitting this to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
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Maybe. Need some cover art, really. Preferably by someone whose artistic talents don't look like someone's paintbrush got swapped with a rabid cat.
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Actually to the best of my knowledge you don't really need cover art. And if worst comes to worst, try using some kind of screenshot.