When Flaris crashed he saw it as a failure. He needs to get back to Canterlot to complete his military training. But does he really want to?
When Flaris crashed he saw it as a failure. He needs to get back to Canterlot to complete his military training. But does he really want to?
1000 words?
Seems legit.
Hello friend happen to find the story a little interesting. Even though you do have grammar errors I just read past them like in my own writing. Just get someone to proofread your writing. I'm just as bad a writer probably even worse lol just write on brother write on
>deleting comments
And Pica_Pie's to boot. I haven't seen that kid say anything rude which makes this suspect. Time to read the fic and see why these comments got erased.
ahahahahaha
Now i see why. People were complaining about OCxMane 6. Especially when it's sloppy like this.
You should fire PuddingNPie, as there's a bunch of grammatical errors he failed to pick up on.
2339600 i personally found his a bit rude actually changing the way MY OC talks. i mean come on. also I'm so tired of seeing comments about gramma errors rather then reading the story.
2339688 Regardless of content it's bad form to delete comments. It gives the appearance that you're ignoring criticism and immature, even if you're not.
>Looks through my Google Drive
>Finds FtP proofreading doc
"I totally recognize that fic! I wonder what became of it..."
>Massive comment deletion +Two new chapters
"Hey, I'm mentioned in the Ch.2 A/N!"
"What? Are you not familiar with the concept of editing...?
"I can assure you that I never changed the characterization or the flow of the story (per se)!"
~ChocoLatte
PS. There's still (lots of) room for improvements on your grammar...