Martyr an Ex-Caravan Guard/Ex-Raider finds out his lineage traces back to an old tribe of ponies who existed before Equestrias Install.
Martyr begins his adventure across the wasteland as a raider with a small pocket of friends who help him through his endeavors of basic Wasteland life.
As time continues things get complicated, and his friends begin dying around him during peculiar occurrences
He must break the curse set upon his blood line those thousands of years ago by traveling through Equestria and into the nuclear winter wasteland that had become the old home of the three tribes and find the Temple of the Timelords and free himself from the burden it carries.
Chapters (2)
*Edit* I red it again, and not to be off topic but your user name is beasty.
dang it, i did an ex raider story. this sucks, know my story is not creative.
Good story
The premise of this story sounds interesting. It's unique also, from what I can gather.
However, I got to about 3,000 words and just couldn't read it anymore. I'm a person that gets very frustrated when a person misspells or misuses a word. There were times when I face-palmed (it's 'to', not 'too'), and there were times when I wasn't sure of what you were getting at (double-sided blade. Is it a dagger? Is it a Darth Maul style thing? I don't know.)
Comments are greatly appreciated
165707 Double blade with pony mouth grip would likely be a handle with blade from each end.On that note isn't the word handle derived from hand? Should it be hoofdle? How's that for misusing words!