First off, I want to apologize.
I normally don't quit half way through but I realized just how below par I was in the story telling department.

With School over, nothing is left but to think, and I thought a lot about my Broken Hourglass Story, how to improve if not at all try and finish it.
My plan is to work slowly on this, and maybe revise a few things maybe even revise the whole story, (all two chapters)

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I realize for those who are watching I am not dead
I'm working on the chapters ahead as well as dealing with some school and personal stuff.

I have not fallen out of this drive to write.

I'm working on it and I will release.
just don't expect a due date I'm still going to go through my personal problems

Yeap second chapter is out

Remember how I said it was going to be shorter?
Yeah well We dismissed that claim and made it TEN TIMES LONGER!! ._.

I think I really could have cut this in half though guys.

I did my best but not entirely the best I could do.
And I realize that it may not be as good as few or no one suspected it to be
But thank you for reading I will get on Chapter three and the rest of my failed chapters

Also life update for those nosy ponies

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So very sorry
Currently moving
Internet not set up at new house
Being rushed out as I type
Thank you for being patience I will deliver when I can
I'm so very sorry
Will be on when the internet is back up at the new house.

Sweet Celestia give me strength

I swear in the name of Celestia Chapter Two is almost done for those who still care!

I just have a paper to write is all!!

Will be out by Friday .... Friday.... going to go down on Friday

I feel like I should re-boot the first chapter to fit a more wider range

Like extending the prologue and re editing chapter one
Something don't feel in place and as I continue writing I am getting more and more ideas that keep making the story board complex in terms of continuing.
However I want to re-boot it I'm not sure if I should

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Chapter Two is done! Its just a matter of Editing it to fit better and have my grammar fixed to my best ability

I tried going back to my First Chapter and as I read it I said
"Well.... shit this has got to be re-edited"

Sadly I can't .-. when I press save changes here on FiM it doesn't work! Anyone know why?

Also Lent is here for those of us who believe in that God fellow, personally use Celestia's name in vain

Anyways I gave up something, COFFEE

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Ugh I'm not exactly pleased with myself right now!

The biggest one is not writing, I feel the passion to write and when I go to type I suddenly STOP
Scared that it will suck, scared of all the people who are out there to just put down a story just for the sake of putting them down.

But you know what? I'm surrounded by fellow bronies who are the best kinds of people to be surrounded by

Now this is all me, and I am currently typing now!

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Those of you who are into my story you are probably asking where the second chapter is

Well I have to start making deadlines for myself if I am to release these at all.
Easily distracted by Nostalgia (I found all three of my Jak and Daxter games /)^3^(\ )

So I plan on making this done and ready for release around Wednesday of next week'
After that I am up for suggestions on how long in between these should be released

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I knew giving myself one day to relax and think on the next few chapters was enough time to begin writing some more.
I'm not saying its going to be released early or even that it won't take some time
I just need to type other wise I will start getting antsy.

Currently working on the second chapter, once I have read through it I will send it to a proof-reader then change things up
Advice is greatly appreciated, and I would like some pony to talk to about all this

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