There are some things in life they don't warn you about, such as your wife asking to try new, rather unique things in the bedroom. But to please her, Shining would do damn near anything.
overall a very good story. you nailed most of the gender swapping parts and the sex was good. my favorite chapter was the fairs since the dynamics of that chapter was so spot on and i fondly remember Aegis having trouble with mare things especially her weight. i think my biggest disappointment was that the wedding was still a by the textbook event: it's the girls day. considering the swapped genders and positions of the characters Eros being a prince and Aegis being a standard citizen you could have done something to make it a male's day. still thats a minor thing and i enjoyed everything to it's end.
I loved the ending, but I cannot help but be saddened that it has come to an end. I cannot wait to see your next project. Hopefully it comes jam-packed with more gender bending goodness.
Very enjoyable story! I enjoyed the genderswapping. I wasn't quite as into the porn, but I'm never into porn. I especially liked the last few segments.
She trotted out at a slower pace than before, making certain the ride isn't too rough on Eros and preventing him from falling off. The first thought that came to mind was that there had to be other guards around, possibly still around the throne room. If she could get a group to-
*wasn't
“Tell me, do you really think you can protect him?” asked the creature. It looked down its nose at Aegis in a haughty way that reminded her of the worst nobles she's ever encountered.
*she'd
“Don't worry, you have me here to take away all that pain.” Aegis felt Eros magic surround her, along with a kiss to her forehead, alleviating the pain.
*Eros'
As for the story itself, well done. I don't know if you kept Aegis and Eros in the same emotive gender on purpose or accident, but it was a thrilling read nonetheless.
Just finished this story last night and fantastic is the word to describe it. The fact that it wasn't just a clop fic is what kept me interested, there was something new around every chapter and I loved it. Now the chapter Maybe, In a Different Life (Part 2) made spaghetti come out of me like play dough. A lot of awkward scenes there, yet some how very relatable. Our teenage years are full of awkward moments, when looking back on, makes you want to go back and smack yourself across the face. I guess that's where the chapter redeemed itself, the fact that it was very relatable and realistic (Character wise). I feel like I can take a lot from this and use it in my own writing. (Technique wise, I'm not going to steal your story or anything in it)
Celestia walking around as a stallion for no reason whatsoever? You know what, I probably wouldn't question it either. You're damned right I would want to know why, but I don't think I would want to know given the context of the situation. Some things are better left unknown.
Before her eyes the spot changed, forming words: Nowhere is safe.
that line actually gave me chills =P was like something out of a goosebumps episode All in all, great fic, & great fic within a fic, definitely head cannoning these last 3 chapters as Shining/Cadence's official childhood, Cheers for the great read
I'm so gonna read this again. I really want to get back into my own genderswap story, but I just can't think of a good storyline. Maybe rereading this will help!
<(yay!)
I'd ask for more, but 1: I know more's on route in a way, 2: t'was a good ending to a very good, long story.
This story:
The clop:
That ending:
This was an epic ride.
I'll miss seeing the updates to it.
Well done all the same.
~Skeeter The Lurker
overall a very good story. you nailed most of the gender swapping parts and the sex was good. my favorite chapter was the fairs since the dynamics of that chapter was so spot on and i fondly remember Aegis having trouble with mare things especially her weight. i think my biggest disappointment was that the wedding was still a by the textbook event: it's the girls day. considering the swapped genders and positions of the characters Eros being a prince and Aegis being a standard citizen you could have done something to make it a male's day. still thats a minor thing and i enjoyed everything to it's end.
bwavo
I think this story deserves a sequel because it feels like there's something more to this story.
Brilliant! That is all.
I loved the ending, but I cannot help but be saddened that it has come to an end. I cannot wait to see your next project. Hopefully it comes jam-packed with more gender bending goodness.
I praised this enough in my blog, so I'll just say this: Hell of a ride, brother. Hell of a ride.
Nooo mommmy its over
Yes, your story was quite enjoyable. I drank it up like a fine drink.
Thanks for publishing it.
Yay for lots of story! Hope the sequel has as much story or more!
Now that it's over, I don't know what to say.
All that seems to be missing is an epilogue, cause we don't see their reactions to the dream. Otherwise, nice job.
I actually dreamt of reading a different ending to this story... this one was happier.
Thank you.
Before I even read this, I must squee about this being updated.
And, onto the read.
Plaudite, amici, comedia finita est.
Very enjoyable story! I enjoyed the genderswapping. I wasn't quite as into the porn, but I'm never into porn. I especially liked the last few segments.
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"comoedia"
this was a great story, can't wait for the sequel
I all enjoyed it!
*wasn't
*she'd
*Eros'
As for the story itself, well done. I don't know if you kept Aegis and Eros in the same emotive gender on purpose or accident, but it was a thrilling read nonetheless.
uh how bout an update explaining what the fuck happened with everything here -.o?.....
so are you working on royal duties inheritance as well then?.....
awww no clop finish :/ ....
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I'm an editor for Royal Duties: Inheritance but I'm not doing any of the story planning.
2970513 i see , well good on you then....
Not bad at all.
Awwww, no Aegis laying eggs... I kinda wanted that...
Am I weird in the head?
i just came everywhere... and i loved every second of it... i would really like to see their reaction to this dream though... just saying...
Ah, so that explains the seemingly random 'what if they were the opposite genders' story that popped up in the middle of the story.
Just finished this story last night and fantastic is the word to describe it. The fact that it wasn't just a clop fic is what kept me interested, there was something new around every chapter and I loved it. Now the chapter Maybe, In a Different Life (Part 2) made spaghetti come out of me like play dough. A lot of awkward scenes there, yet some how very relatable. Our teenage years are full of awkward moments, when looking back on, makes you want to go back and smack yourself across the face. I guess that's where the chapter redeemed itself, the fact that it was very relatable and realistic (Character wise). I feel like I can take a lot from this and use it in my own writing. (Technique wise, I'm not going to steal your story or anything in it)
Celestia walking around as a stallion for no reason whatsoever? You know what, I probably wouldn't question it either. You're damned right I would want to know why, but I don't think I would want to know given the context of the situation. Some things are better left unknown.
that line actually gave me chills =P was like something out of a goosebumps episode
All in all, great fic, & great fic within a fic, definitely head cannoning these last 3 chapters as Shining/Cadence's official childhood, Cheers for the great read
Thank you for creating such a fun story. I rather enjoyed it.
Holly Frak! I loved this story and couldn't put it down as it were.
And the last three chapters were amazing I seriously hope this fic gets a sequel.
THERE IS PUNCH AND COOKIES BY THE DOOR!!
Did anyone else picture the 'ink' monster as the Crawler from Fable 3?
why cant i like this story? "Incorrect rating code" wtf
I was having Wtf moments throughout the last few chapters. Thank God that it was wrapped up. I thought I was going mad.
Overall the story was emotional and compelling to read. Well done!
YAY COOKIES, um I mean, thank you........ eep!
I loved the story and can't wait for AWSOME SEQUELS DESU!!!!!!!
see you soon bro hoof
3413296 Here's one where she ends up pregnant: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/130335/oh-the-things-we-do-for-love
That was awesome and beautiful and it was sweet of them do that for them
Out of curiosity, did the sequel ever come.
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Hehehe
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Nope, no sequel yet. It'll come eventually.
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Yes. Yes it was.
I Love it <3
oooooo theres guna be a sequel? :D im guna follow you now so i can read it
3957398 Well, I've already started a series of side stories in the Kinds of Love world to look at the characters a big more closely. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/160814/kinds-of-love-the-world
3957427 yay :D thanks
I originally came for other reasons but damn, am I glad I stayed
I'm so gonna read this again. I really want to get back into my own genderswap story, but I just can't think of a good storyline. Maybe rereading this will help!
i marked it for read a long time ago...
and it got buried in my faves/readlaters.
one thing i want to say.
i hope he gets it in his butt :3