There are some things in life they don't warn you about, such as your wife asking to try new, rather unique things in the bedroom. But to please her, Shining would do damn near anything.
Woohoo! And update at last! Loved the frog the best. Although I noticed a pretty significant error. "fish bowel game" should be spelled bowl. Bowels are the guts of an animal. Other than that solid chapter. Looking forward to more.
I really like this story. Very well written. Keep up the good work.
I also have a prediction, or maybe a the hope of a crazy fan. Aegis and Eros will try to change back, and only Eros will revert. Why because Aegis is pregnant, at the spell prevents the change to protect the child.
I expected heavy clop but I actually got a good story (The clopping one was also a really good one but ya know, not really a story but more of a single scene if you get what I mean). I can only say, keep up the good work, this is certainly a great story and I really like the plot. I can't wait till you release chapter 3!
I'm really enjoying this. After almost a year of reading fictions (and I have 14+ pages of saved ones and doesn't include several that I didn't save before I made an account) I find it hard to be engaged. This one does it for me though and I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work.
Have to admit, I wasn't expecting this to update. Nevertheless I'm glad to see it did, I really liked the concept and would love to see where you decide to take this. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
I am absolutely in LOVE with this story! I'm a sucker for gender-benders, but gender-bender plus MLP plus two of my absolute favorite characters? GENIUS! Overall it's very well written and I can't wait to read more!
2215827 2216257 The frog is from Rocko's Modern Life. Season 1, episode 9, Carnival Knowledge.
2216098 While the purple pony isn't directly taken from that episode, he is a direct ponification of a character from it. In that episode, the carnival was run by a purple slug, presumably named Slippy, which is why I gave him a slug cutiemark. However, for an in universe explanation, let's just say that he's a pretty slimy business man and the slug represents that.
Seriously, it's so interesting to see them interacting as the opposite gender. Hell, I almost want to say skip any future clop and just stick with this kind of slice-of-life stuff!
Now, this chapter was nice. A bit heavy on the stereotypes, but ah, that's what cliches are for, right? I wonder how his sister and the other main characters are going to react to this. Because, let's face it, there's no such thing as a secret in a spa or barber shop. And once Rarity knows this: OH THE SCANDAL!
"...don't Judge me."
This was awesome.
This was kind of adorable
Boy is Shining so very whipped in this story. I didn't think it was possible for anypony to be this whipped.
I judge him so hard
Rocko's modern life~ rocko's modern life
Woohoo! And update at last!
Loved the frog the best. Although I noticed a pretty significant error. "fish bowel game" should be spelled bowl. Bowels are the guts of an animal. Other than that solid chapter. Looking forward to more.
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Fixed.
I really like this story.
Very well written. Keep up the good work.
I also have a prediction, or maybe a the hope of a crazy fan.
Aegis and Eros will try to change back, and only Eros will revert.
Why because Aegis is pregnant, at the spell prevents the change to protect the child.
I expected heavy clop but I actually got a good story (The clopping one was also a really good one but ya know, not really a story but more of a single scene if you get what I mean). I can only say, keep up the good work, this is certainly a great story and I really like the plot. I can't wait till you release chapter 3!
Poor Aggie... Wonder how she'll feel once she get's ruffed up by a stallion... Or two...
Or three....
lol this sounds like an episode of Rocko's modern life. I still have trouble remembering which gender bent pony is which.
... And the frog... I can't quite place it, but he reminds me of a Team Rocket character.... Or something.
This whole story has made me so confused in the best way.
Koodos for making this story not just about the clop! Loving it but admittedly I cannot wait till they do the other forms because...
yes!! Moar!!
This story needs more love. I mean that in both ways.
Keep it coming dude
"Great. Now I'm beginning to think like a mare..."
Woah there Shining Armor, your sexism is showing!*
*Men do that too; it's not restricted to the female domain.
This is great.
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The frog, as well as a few other references in this chapter, comes from Rocko's Modern Life. Season 1, episode 9, Carnival Knowledge.
I can’t wait for the inevitable guys drinking contest when they really start mixing things up…
This story is going to be a lot of fun!
that.... was... hilarious!!! Go on, dear...
"don't judge me"
One way ticket to Judgemenal Avenue
I'm really enjoying this. After almost a year of reading fictions (and I have 14+ pages of saved ones and doesn't include several that I didn't save before I made an account) I find it hard to be engaged. This one does it for me though and I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work.
Nope, no judging at all, considering the demographic.
This chapter was positively wonderful! I look forward to your next update
Spiffy!
It's still Shining and Cadence in my mind, so the "he and she" thing is confusing. Give it another chapter or two though.
Trying to figure out the differences, of how the other gender's mind works must be tough.
you have made a good fic all the better with this chapter can't wait for the next one
Now begins the long wait for the next chapter...
Just joking, but I wonder what's going to happen next. More sex, or just random moments?
Have to admit, I wasn't expecting this to update. Nevertheless I'm glad to see it did, I really liked the concept and would love to see where you decide to take this. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
please tell me the inspiration for the chapter
i like knowing things is all...
There were a couple things about this chapter that genuinely caught me off guard. There are as follows along with my reactions:
Uh...
What, no! Buck that, I must analyze this!
My only conclusion is he is good at catching these.
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That'd certainly make Equestria a more interesting place to live in.
All in all, a pretty good chapter.
Michigan J Frog of looney tunes fame I think thats who the frog reminded me of.
I am absolutely in LOVE with this story! I'm a sucker for gender-benders, but gender-bender plus MLP plus two of my absolute favorite characters? GENIUS! Overall it's very well written and I can't wait to read more!
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The frog is from Rocko's Modern Life. Season 1, episode 9, Carnival Knowledge.
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While the purple pony isn't directly taken from that episode, he is a direct ponification of a character from it. In that episode, the carnival was run by a purple slug, presumably named Slippy, which is why I gave him a slug cutiemark. However, for an in universe explanation, let's just say that he's a pretty slimy business man and the slug represents that.
i laughed so hard that i cryed manly tears of laughter .. that frog really did have it coming .. more plz
This is pretty adorable
Will the next chapter be like this, like chapter one or a combination?:D
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Trust me it not funny. I know how he feels.
I have a brushable Twilight, so judging him(her?) is out of my ability.
Wow! This is even better without the clop!
Seriously, it's so interesting to see them interacting as the opposite gender. Hell, I almost want to say skip any future clop and just stick with this kind of slice-of-life stuff!
Almost...
Also, we must have a chapter with Aegis and Twilight!!
I found moments in this to be funny. I think this is a great concept.
Commence read.
A cute chapter.
I love love LOVE this story.
It's the perfect balance of hot and cute.
PLEASE keep going.
FANTASTIC. THIS WAS BOTH FUNNY AND D'AWWW FILLED.
Continue please.
i can name three PBS shows, 17 different mickey mouse shorts, a spongebob, and a few classic Cartoon Network shows this could fit. Am I close?
Twigis! Twigis and Erolight!
And Discunestia, if we're taking random requests!
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Nope. The cartoon that inspired this chapter is an episode of Rocko's Modern Life called Carnival Knowledge.
Now, this chapter was nice. A bit heavy on the stereotypes, but ah, that's what cliches are for, right?
I wonder how his sister and the other main characters are going to react to this. Because, let's face it, there's no such thing as a secret in a spa or barber shop.
And once Rarity knows this: OH THE SCANDAL!
2222662YAY for generally knowing stuff!
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I knew I would see you somewhere else eventually.