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JimmyBen


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I the magical land of equestria, people still have hard lives, and after growing up with a rather tough one, our protagonist might actually have found a place to rebuild his life. Sometimes i think that bad things happen to the less fortunate, because our guy lost his job, his dream on rebuilding was falling apart at the seams, and then, it gets worse. An unknown zombie virus attacks everywhere, including ponyville, were our guy is residing. And now hes got to get out, but how, and if he can, will he help anyone. Read to find out
The entire story the characters are indeed human, but references of being a pony or such will probably still be included, characters will be included in the story, in due time, ENJOY.

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Comments ( 10 )
Comment posted by JimmyBen deleted Feb 3rd, 2013

This fanfic felt more of a fantasy for the reader, disengaging interest for the audience through the self absorbing thoughts of the protagonist.
The story felt like a giant summary as a whole and felt childish, rushed, and lacking of details on important events.

Comment posted by JimmyBen deleted Feb 8th, 2013

2072382 have you considered that the author might actually be a child?:trixieshiftright:

2097084 He's not, I met him last night on Google+, on hangout

this was the most heart touching story i had ever heard, "Im sure he'll show himself, one day".

Do i sense forshadowing coming on? :duck:

>............... Maybe..... : |

yep, spike is so pissed.:twilightoops:

more!:heart: :fluttershysad: :applecry: ill die if you dont make more! :fluttercry:

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