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InsaneJustin


Was a fan of the music, Got into the show, Now im loving alot of the fan fics.

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The dislike's with no explanation have begun

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YOU MONSTER! YOU BASTARD! YOU INHUMAN...uh, THING! :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::flutterrage:

Oh god, the first chapter and I was already cracking up, I needed a break from the massive amount of sob stories. Especially loved the scene with Flutters and the CMC after the wolves tore into him. You sir, are good at writing.

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That's all I can say, heh

2179667 Thank's. I like to think all the time I spent writing hasn't gone to waste. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Tenebris Caeruleus deleted Feb 26th, 2013

Great story, kind of wondering. If Merry could absorb life and death. Why didn't he just drain the bad guys of life to save Scoots?

Also, I think a there is enough comedic content to warrent a comedy tag if you so choose.

2181176 I thought of that several times, but figured that would just be OP, and then I figured I'll just have it so in his state of mind he just didn't think of it, because he never considered her dead to begin with. It just slipped his mind, I'm pretty sure I mentioned he wasn't very smart to begin with. :ajsmug: Also as a side note, just think of it as one of those quirks in a story that make you go what the fuck

2181340 It wasnt my main focus to make it comedy, it just sort of happened as I wrote it. :twilightblush:

Well, now I'm all sad for Merry.
He should take an army of 299 with him, ya know.

2185238 Ha! I'm not sure how I am going to continue it, but so far he's alone, I'll post up a link to it in the author notes of the last chapter when I get a few chapters done.

i was actually more of wondering why he didn't use the immense super good energy to revive her?:unsuresweetie:

2227692 You cant heal what's already dead.:fluttercry:

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well in theory a strong healing atbility or spell can act like an electric charge that the hospitals use to restart someone's body. but true.
I also see a possibility that if had hadn't smashed the good deed tube he might have been able to ask them to restore scootaloo as his good boon. but one never knows who they decide what they do.:pinkiesad2:

I'm also very looking forward to the sequel.:pinkiehappy:

Crap, I didn't expect these kind of feels reading this story, it was funny and... morbid I guess until the end. But I expect Merry to use his powers after his rampage.

Ouch, and his pride takes a direct hit. Talk about a mood-killer. :facehoof:

This is a really odd story...Good odd but still odd.

Also

Well sense my iPod is dead

since

Twilgith dropped her head

Twilgith is bset pnoy!

Argh! So many spelling and grammatical errors!
Use clothes, not cloths! Cloths are peices of fabric and clothes are stuff that you wear!

I still feel weird about him giving a small filly a deadly weapon...

2916697 heh, yeah, he isn't he smartest parent around

Hey there!:pinkiehappy:

I am really enjoying this story, but I am sad to see so few likes:pinkiesad2:

I will admit to passing up this story a few times because of the 'tragedy' and 'dark' tags:pinkiecrazy:

Tragic stuff does happen and it is a bit dark, but tragedy does not run the story (at least not so far):duck:

I think if you messed with the tags a bit as well as put more character tags on the bottom more people would get a chance to see how truly awsome this story really is!:moustache::moustache::moustache:

Good luck!:rainbowdetermined2:

2941796 I added the tragedy tag because it pretty much ends with it. but yes, the Story doesn't seem like it because he isn't in a constant struggle... its one of those, Shit happens tragedy's

its spelled mythril.

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I spent like an hour deciding which spelling to use for the word Mithral and decided to use the Spelling Dungeons and Dragons used. :derpytongue2: Because I liked the Pen and paper version :moustache:

2178218 only one dislike, I salute thee good sir

These feels. I did not ask for them. But they were forced upon me. I salute you good sir.

When I heard 'Absorption' I was kinda hoping of the consuming one can do in the Prototype games, woulda been cool man, woulda been cool.

Oh, oh god. I was biting my hand to keep from laughing and waking the whole house when he first got to equestria.
Edit: correction, most of the chapter... Ow.

Wow Fluttershy...is she gonna be some crazy stalker fan-girl or something?

So I've never been a fan of the CMC and this story didn't help .-. But imma keep reading because I happen to like the MC

Great story and now there's a sequel :D

“I mean he’s on the edge. All he needs is another big push to completely snap. I just hope that never comes.” Luna looked ahead of them on the chariot “Sister, we must prevent the griffins from finding him at any cost. I feel the outcome could end drastically.” Celestia put a hoof up.

Like killing Scoots?

“Worry not Lulu, that was my plan from the beginning. And even if he does snap, he doesn’t have the power of a god like you, so I’m sure it wouldn’t be that bad.” Luna just sighed

One word, boons.
Also, way to tempt fate Lulu.

Called it, the catalyst was Scoots...:fluttercry:

Soooooooo what did he forget that he could absorb absolutely EVERYTHING including Death itself? He should be able to come back cause isn't he undead?

Soooooooo what did he forget that he could absorb absolutely EVERYTHING including Death itself? He should be able to come back cause isn't he undead?

This is really good so far. . . Or is it that it is so painful to read that it brings pleasure? 🤔
Meh, either way, onwards to the next chapter!

My odds of satisfying a pony just flew out the damn window...but then again I do have hands.

Fuck it! Beats renaming one of my hands I guess .’

Who will be known as Red’s friend A, filly 1 and filly 2. Followed by Parent 1 and Parent 2.

I see you have more creativity than me for naming characters.

But absorption power? What the fuck am I now? Some kind of Mystic towel?

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I don't know, his last boon just kinda sucks . . . :pinkiegasp:

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It's called cumulative power my friend. It's not one thing, it's all of them.

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