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InsaneJustin
Was a fan of the music, Got into the show, Now im loving alot of the fan fics.
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Just wanted to say, I did this in a single night, so I know it's probably badly written lol. And the F key on my keyboard is broken, I've been using the windows on screen keyboard to type in the letter F or everything I do. It's pretty annoying, I never realized how many words have the letter F in them.
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Your comment was the first thing I read, and here's some advice: find a proofreader or someone with a working keyboard to edit this.
Of get a cheap keyboard. You can get a decent, vanilla keyboard for pretty cheap.
cool story bro. I like the concept.
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Got a 15 dollar keyboard coming
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Took me a while to figure what derpys power could be, so I just googled, Power of bubbles, and saw an article about scientists usein bubbles to do Cold fusion experiments.
Interesting
I read this a while ago, before I had an account, and I really liked it, I searched high and low! LOW AND HIGH! HIGH AND LOW! And I finally found it!
Interesting concept, but it could use a lot of work. Some of your more consistent errors are missing commas and inappropriate capitalization. You also have a habit of writing "and" when you mean "an". I'm not sure about your choice of tense, either. While the present tense can be employed when writing about past events, it doesn't seem to work here
If you're willing to go through and fix some of the larger mistakes, I'd be happy to narrow down any that you miss. It won't be perfect, but you should see some dramatic improvement for very little work
Hope I don't sound too harsh. I'm not great at this sorta thing
4981179 I remember this one. Holy jeez its been awhile since I wrote this. Pretty sure my grammar has improved a bit since then. But It's always best to learn everything you can.