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Knackerman


I am the Knackerman. Most of my writing deals with horror, suspense, and tragedy. And yes, there will be gore.

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All roads lead to this final confrontation. But what is really at stake? The future of Equestria? Twilight Sparkle's friendships? The past and the future collide with the present in the final tale of the Broken series as Twilight Sparkle tries desperately to sort fact from fiction, truth from lies, and reality from fantasy. Who can she trust? Will she accept the the world according to Celestia...or Discord?

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Comments ( 18 )

"I guess you’ll at least be prepared for it Dash. Last time this happened to you, they nearly melted your hooves off! Guess that explains why you can’t stand anypony touching them." :rainbowderp: *mind blown*

It's alright, I didn't feel like sleeping or keeping sanity tonight anyway.:pinkiecrazy:

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Sanity is over rated and sleep is for the weak. Enjoy the madness while it lasts! :pinkiehappy:

:applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry:There are not enough sad faces to truly express how I feel at the end of his chapter.

693316 thank you I will :pinkiecrazy:

20 minutes and I am already trying to find a way to "game the system" aka find loopholes in reality. Who is to say that there HAS to be a balance where one cant exists without the other, perfection may very well be subjective.

:derpyderp1::fluttercry::pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh::twilightangry2::yay::flutterrage::applejackconfused: wow that was all Mindbuck My mind blew up. no i have to clean it up. thank you!:pinkiecrazy:

Well this was a happy ending I guess 4 me :3 :pinkiehappy:

So Luna knows too. That's interesting, considering she was on the moon when Celestia did her Lightning Machine shenanigans to the Mane 6.

Well alrighty then. It appears we have a problem. Methinks Screwball is very happy right about now.

This is now my new cannon for screwball Motherfucker's. No crazy eyed twilights yet. Wish that was an emoticon.

This. Story. Was. Awesome! Seriously, I'm glad I decided to read it. A while ago, I saw this and didn't read it because of the gore tag (I was really squeamish about blood back then). But I'm glad I came back! I had read just about every other Broken story (except for honesty, I believe) and loved them all, and this did not disappoint. Everything from the story, to the tension, even the violence was great! And the ending... that as like bittersweet's deformed cousin, creepysweet, and I loved it! All in all, this story was awesome! I give it 10 :pinkiecrazy:/ 9 :pinkiecrazy:



Also the whole Twilight-breaking-and-magic-pouring-out thing gave me n Idea for part of a D&D campaign I'm making. So thanks for that too.

The cage has opened, the floodgates burst wide...
Raise your voice to the sky, Twilight, and let your roar stretch far and wide!

How does it feel, Celestia, to admit this secret? I am curious, what other secrets have you kept, what lies have you told?
You feel proud of Project Harmony. It worked out to some degree, I will agree, but it accomplished it through all the wrong means. Re-education, ha!

In the end, I think, you got what you deserved...
Shame, it didn't have to be this way, but your actions sealed your fate. Too bad everyone and the world suffered as a consequence.

The truth exists only as itself. Lies corrupt the truth and can change. Lies can be built on, a foundation and a structure waiting for destruction.
You built a kingdom on the backs of six mares, Celestia. You had all the plans and protocols ready, exploiting lives and feeling content to sit back as Twilight Sparkle killed everyone to get to you! The truth, thankfully, came out and your kingdom has fallen... Innocence and guilt means nothing now, though. You're dead, I think. No more lies, no more games, ... only truth and the consequences.

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