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Flabbergasted
"The light shineth in darkness and the darkness comprehended it not."
Flabbergasted
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>Prologue
>Complete
lolwut
2905204
I don't even fucking know what I'm doing.
topkek
funny thing is my hand was in my pants
Emo duck. Why is that hilarious?
I read it. It's good.
Could use a little format work, and I saw a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but it's good.
2905225
Yeah, its nothing but a draft I typed up in the span of more or less 15 minutes.
I also its not even fully complete. I might make a few alteration here and there.
I'm just happy to see that people find it funny. Honestly I'd like to here some of the tangents that you don't find funny.
2905214
You too.
2905237
The jokes all worked well. I at least saw the humor in all of them. Some were actually really funny. (Like the emo duck.)
It's too short and random to find anything I didn't like. Sometimes it was really over-the-top random, but it's just a short little random comedy. That's to be expected.
2905251
And that's just the prologue.
I have all these ideas of jokes I can put into it and things that can happen.
Its more of a "What do I put in between?" kind of thing.
Amusing. Keep at it.
There were a fair number of grammatical errors, some of which I have compiled here, with corrections.
"Your" should be "you're."
Those apostrophes shouldn't be there, and "Knees" and "Arms" shouldn't be capitalized
"lest" should be "let's"
"Ill" should be "I'll"
"Its" should be "It's."
"Too" should be "to."
I think you meant something like "shape of that fat pillow."
"Their" should be "they're."
Now, you said that this is a draft, so at least some of these errors were probably going to be fixed by the final version anyway. But I typed up this entire comment before I saw you saying that, so I don't care; I'm posting it anyway.
2905287
Yeah, I haven't even read it other than a light skim.
Though your help is appreciated.
1957545
Dude, check it out.
LOL
It's funny because Emo Rabbit!
my god i think you gave my soul cancer
3355184
That bad?
3355188 that GOOD more like
3355202
Well, that's surprising...
I think I'm gonna work on it more.
This is pretty entertaining, but I'm high as the fucking sun and don't know what I'm doing, fun story tho
2905237 Companion has three syllables... Half Life 3 confirmed!?
3404988
Ugh...
Why would I kill your family for liking best game franchise?
3484330
I know he's right, doesn't mean I cant
The companion cube becomes natty.
Who?
3540113
What?
When?
Where?
and Why?
... Huh, well, that was a thing.
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this story.
3775335
Kill me. It's the best you could do.
3775340
-sigh- Patrolling Fimfiction almost makes you wish for a nuclear winter...
3775343
The fuck?
I think you mean *Sigh* 'Cause, ya' know. I'm pretty sure that's what you were aiming for.
Frolicking in a nuclear wonderland.
3775347
Some people use asterisks, some people use hyphens. I seem to flip-flop between the two as I feel like it.
3775348
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/616/861/ba7.jpg
3775349
All things are a game, dependent on perspective.
3775352
Oh, like Dark Souls?!
Except Dark Souls turned me into a sadomasochist.
3775360
*Blinks* Huh. Well, have fun with that.
3775363
IRL: Don't fucking hurt me!
Dark Souls: I've died too many times to give a shit. Come get me fuckers!
3775371
Personally, I give precisely no fucks either way. I'm at that unique mental stage where I don't really care about anything... except Ponies, it would seem.
3775376
So... you achieved Nirvana I presume?
3775379
Nope, not really.
3775384
... Fuck you.
*Crying*
3775386
CRY SOME MORE, LEETLE BABY MAN!
3775391
Piece o' Piss!
3775397
No, I think not.
3775399
I will gut you like a Cornish game hen.
3775401
THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!
3775404
I'm runnin' circles around ya'
3775411
*Spots new Cancelled tag on story* When the hell did that happen?
3775415
Like, 20 minutes ago.
It's the reason I posted that last chapter.
3775421
I see. Well, guess I'm out then.
*Swan dives out of the tenth story window*
Don't mind me
just think I should put this here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=q5w6ieaTxGA