"And, you can't forget Sir Quacks Alot's anti depressants" Behind them a Duck stood unnoticed. He had dark feathers. A stark contrast from his lighter shaded brethren. A small tear slowly ran down his right eye. All he wanted was to be loved. "You know how upset he gets when he doesn't get his anti depressants."
2905225 Yeah, its nothing but a draft I typed up in the span of more or less 15 minutes. I also its not even fully complete. I might make a few alteration here and there. I'm just happy to see that people find it funny. Honestly I'd like to here some of the tangents that you don't find funny.
2905237 The jokes all worked well. I at least saw the humor in all of them. Some were actually really funny. (Like the emo duck.)
It's too short and random to find anything I didn't like. Sometimes it was really over-the-top random, but it's just a short little random comedy. That's to be expected.
2905251 And that's just the prologue. I have all these ideas of jokes I can put into it and things that can happen. Its more of a "What do I put in between?" kind of thing.
Amusing. Keep at it. There were a fair number of grammatical errors, some of which I have compiled here, with corrections.
conversations your sharing
"Your" should be "you're."
his Knees wen't weak, Arms wen't heavy
Those apostrophes shouldn't be there, and "Knees" and "Arms" shouldn't be capitalized
I dunno lest just say they
"lest" should be "let's"
Ill make you the salad
"Ill" should be "I'll"
Its not like
"Its" should be "It's."
I have too go so don't
"Too" should be "to."
he did like the of that fat pillow
I think you meant something like "shape of that fat pillow."
"Their... nice."
"Their" should be "they're."
Now, you said that this is a draft, so at least some of these errors were probably going to be fixed by the final version anyway. But I typed up this entire comment before I saw you saying that, so I don't care; I'm posting it anyway.
keep at it
>Prologue
>Complete
lolwut
2905204
I don't even fucking know what I'm doing.
topkek
funny thing is my hand was in my pants
Emo duck. Why is that hilarious?
I read it. It's good.
Could use a little format work, and I saw a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but it's good.
2905225
Yeah, its nothing but a draft I typed up in the span of more or less 15 minutes.
I also its not even fully complete. I might make a few alteration here and there.
I'm just happy to see that people find it funny. Honestly I'd like to here some of the tangents that you don't find funny.
2905214
You too.
2905237
The jokes all worked well. I at least saw the humor in all of them. Some were actually really funny. (Like the emo duck.)
It's too short and random to find anything I didn't like. Sometimes it was really over-the-top random, but it's just a short little random comedy. That's to be expected.
2905251
And that's just the prologue.
I have all these ideas of jokes I can put into it and things that can happen.
Its more of a "What do I put in between?" kind of thing.
Amusing. Keep at it.
There were a fair number of grammatical errors, some of which I have compiled here, with corrections.
"Your" should be "you're."
Those apostrophes shouldn't be there, and "Knees" and "Arms" shouldn't be capitalized
"lest" should be "let's"
"Ill" should be "I'll"
"Its" should be "It's."
"Too" should be "to."
I think you meant something like "shape of that fat pillow."
"Their" should be "they're."
Now, you said that this is a draft, so at least some of these errors were probably going to be fixed by the final version anyway. But I typed up this entire comment before I saw you saying that, so I don't care; I'm posting it anyway.
2905287
Yeah, I haven't even read it other than a light skim.
Though your help is appreciated.
1957545
Dude, check it out.
LOL
It's funny because Emo Rabbit!