• Member Since 6th Jul, 2012
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Cloud Shaker


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Artemis is just your average librarian. Apart from the fact that he's the librarian of the Royal Canterlot Library. And Chief Scholar of the Royal Archives. He's acerbic, quick to anger, and reclusive, and nopony in their right minds would associate with him.

Or would they? Follow Artemis as he is forced to take a brief vacation in Ponyville, recording the events of his daily life.

Hey, maybe he'll even find love at the end of it all.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 5 )

Feel free to leave comments on how I could make this story better. I realize that I'm not a great writer and I will have flaws laying around somewhere, and in the end this is all just good writing practice for me. :)

Not a bad wee tale :twilightsmile: If you don't have one yet I do recommend you look into getting a pre-reader to flush out the odd spelling mistake here and there, and also just to tidy up some past tense/present tense mismatches. The narrative is generally good but there are the odd jumps in perspective that can catch the reader out on occasion.

All in all a good effort that probably deserves a bit more recognition :twilightsmile:

Keep up the good work!

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I thank you for the kind words, sir or madam. Truth be told, I felt l was going nowhere with this story. Guess Slice of Life isn't really my forte, although I did enjoy the fact that I didn't need an extensive plot to cover the storyline.

... Meh ill thumbs it up
Good plot
exacution coulda been better but thats what practise is for

I can't believe I'm missing a ranger's apprentice reference, oh no, now I'm going to have re-read the series soon.

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