Derpy Whooves was just flying aimlessly back home when she was attacked and murdered.
After that night, the peaceful town of Ponyville is a bloodbath to find the truth.
Who did this? Why did he/she do this?
When Colgate is framed, she just wants the killer to be found.
Friend is turning against friend, and a race against the clock is turning this place upside down.
Colgate just starts with the weight above her head as she works down to unravel the tight bind of the mystery man who killed her friend.
Chapters (1)
Looks somewhat promising. I would flesh it out a little bit more, though. Add a bit more detail to the story.
Try and add a few paragraph breaks, because it can be a bit disconcerting to look at a giant wall of text.
Just my opinion
Interesting...
Hmm; I'm interested; Even though it prob. lacks in Dash :P
1910341 Thanks so much! Constructive critism is always welcome :)
1910443 *repeat button alert* and yes, interesting. So is Ouran High School Host Club. (I watch too much anime(and cowards are people too))
1910604 For some reason I really enjoy giving characters to background ponies. I don't know why.
glad i found this
1913062 Glad you enjoyed it!
Well derpy is all ready died