A NEW WORLD

by moonlight shine 2

Good bye AND WELCOME!

My sister wasn't ready to take on Moonlight but I had no other way to stop her but why here.
I look behind her she was trying to open a huge door that lead to a wall but there was a injured massive dog next to it.
Then I here Twilight and her friends on the way when they arrived I told them to get rainbow while I handle my sister as they got rainbow and yes she was alright but while I was fighting they were putting on jewlery. I yelled "What are you doing,this is not the time for jewlery!."

"this is not only Jewlery its the ELEMENTS OF HARMONY!" Twilight yells

"THE WHAT?"I growled as moonlight
"Geeze someones angry." Rarity taken back by my appearance.
"Sorry this is my trans-sention form level moonlight.

I may have been chatting with good friends but Nightmare wasn't having any of it she wasn't going down she leaped towards Twilight in anger but I saved her I bone rushed Nightmare she flung to a tree."sorry princess."

Samaraa was trying to run for the door but didn't make it in time before I shot with a attack "SHADOW BOMB" I yelled she flew backwards in the air , I jumped in the air towards her and I........did....what...I had to do. I stabed her with my sword with my very clean cut she looked at me with tears in her eyes. I brought my sister back to die in my arms,she spoken her last words

"Brother....thank you." then she was gone forever.

"no no no no no no no no no" She fades away....into shadow and sinks into the ground, I sat there without moving with my mouth open shes gone I have no one left.I popped out of my transformation then in my hand was a necklace I gave her on her 130th birthday...

On the otherside of the battle field Nightmare was hit bye the elements of harmony and brought back to her normal self. Luna thanked Twilight and her friends for saving her. Luna and the others saw me on the ground holding an item. They stood quiet heads lowered then they saw me run into the forest.
"HELLEX WAIT!"Twilight yelled for me.
"No Twilight, I'll bring him back." Luna stops Twilight then walks into the forest.

As I walked in the forest I felt myself transforming into a pony my body was too weak to hold it off I didn't care.
I sat near a pond waiting for.....something to happen, then...

"Your sad I see."I jumped turning to see Luna walking up.

"Princess! your....you again."

"Indeed I am but you are not yourself." she pointed at the lake and I looked myself....it was me as a pony, dark puple fur, light purple mane, and light blue eyes.

"well I guess I'm a pony now huh?"I looked at Luna

"Indeed but you are still human at heart."

"Wah......I'm not...I killed my own sister...I'm a monster."
Luna puts her hoof on my shoulder.

"Look Luna....here." I gave her the necklace.

"Why?" she looked puzzled.

"Because Luna you are the princess of the night. only royalty can wear it. I lost everything so why not give it to you."
she stops me before could continue."You didn't lose everything you got friends and me."

"Princess...thats...a....really good point."
We looked at each other for awhile we drew closer to each other,then next thing I know I'm locking lips with the princess then..

*cough**cough*

Me and the princess turned to see everyone standing there. I never blushed so hard in my life.
"Come on everyone lets get back to Celestia."

We arrived at the caslte to see Celestia waiting for our return , she was surprised to see us ok. she hugged Luna to the point were Luna could hardly breath. We chatted for awhile before leaving I kissed Luna before we left. while we walked down the Twilight asked...

"So you and the princess huh?"

"Yeah."I looked at Twi and smiled.

"So what are you going to do now?"

"Well since I'm a pony now I guess I'll enjoy some hay."I answered her.

We walked to pony....ville, to see that the town was happy, I looked at the caslte, and I looked at Twi and her friends to notice that I.....was happy too Cause I am the new protector of this world with my new Team.

Author's Note:

EH....BLAH
LIKE IT HATE IT I COULD'VE DONE BETTER BUT SCHOOL'S BACK AT ME HARDER THAN EVER SORRY

Comments

[spetsnaz pinkie pie]

So what sequel maybe or some vodka or both

[moonlight shine 2]

1873213maybe

[spetsnaz pinkie pie]

Then you comrade deserve vodka

[moonlight shine 2]

1873446thenk you

[Lightning Flare]

Girls, come here. You are both in this story, but it doesn't look good from some of the comments.
Why is their a picture of Nightmare Moon in the character's list... NO. DON'T CHANGE ME BACK
Calm down Luna, we won't let that happen again.
Not to be a bitch or anything, o wait, yes I do mean to be a bitch. The discription sounds like Blue Thunder.
I've had enough of this *Brief acton sequence* There, Purple is dead, now we can all go on with our lives... although the discription does look suspicously familyer.

[Lightning Flare]

I must investigate. Celestia, get my hat.
Mother... you don't have a hat. You never had a hat.
Thanks for ruining the moment.

[moonlight shine 2]

1877835huh?

[Lightning Flare]

1877845Ignore them. it's been a long night.

[moonlight shine 2]

1877849i dont get it

[Lightning Flare]

Usualy I just add these things to the read later list and read them when I am in the mood, But this sounds familyer to a story Written by Blue Thunder called Blue Thunder. I'm not calling it a ripoff as there are alot of diffrences, but it has the same Ideas. I am curious to see how you tackled this project.

[moonlight shine 2]

1877865I dont know blue thunder what is it a movie?

[Lightning Flare]

1877857 were a bunch of voices comming out of one computer program, what's not to get. I am Midnight. Then threr is Luna and Celestia, My daughters. And there was Purple but she was destroyed because of the fact she never had anything nice to say.

[Lightning Flare]

1877877 No, it is a fan fic written by my split personality Blue Thunder. Two humans, one evil and trying to destroy the world and one good trying to save it, fight untill the evil one sets off a black hole device, swallowing the world. the origional blast was powerful to rip a hole in space and blast the two humans into limbo. Luna was observing the solar system at the time of the event and wittnessed the death of every human. She could feel the presence of two and pulled them towards Equestria. They blasted through another hole in space and landed in a deasert outside of Equestria, in a crater. Their bodies had been transformed by Luna's touch while they were in limbo. After being rescued their minds were wiped and they were stuck in an orphanage.(Their bodies were new and so had assumed the shape of colts) You can see where some of the similiarities in the discription are.

[moonlight shine 2]

1878014ok

[Lightning Flare]

Ummm, the plot was amazing
That's what he saidmhhhmmmh
The story was amazing but it felt extreamly rushed. The lines bleed together and it was ofter confusing to read in the earlier chapters. You need to find someone to proof read this. But othen then that it was a great story. Luna would like to comment but I have magiced both of their lips shut to spare myself the grief and shame. Celestia is having a dirty joke day and Luna is still talking about herself in the story...

[moonlight shine 2]

1878109 Oh thnks I guess and tell Luna no hard feelings