Lyra and Hands

by jbond

Lyra and Hands

Was the usual morning, Lyra and Bon-Bon were sitting on a bench and talking:

- I tell you, Lyra, people do not exist! And these are your 'hands' - is a myth.
- I'll prove it to you ~!

They never talked, and then, when it was dark, they went to their homes. Just about to Lira has already started to open the door of his house, when she saw a flash.

From the flash left the country, in terms of ponies being. Lyra looked at him and was horrified.

- Who are you? - Shouted Lyra.
- I - a man and I do not know how I ended up here ...
- Wow! Do you have hands! - At edinorozhki eyes lit up.
- Well, is not it? .. - Insecure man replied.
- Great! - Lear jumped for joy. - Hey, come to my house!

Man held for Lyra, she also immediately offered him tea.

- Thank you. - Smile, the man said. - I did not think ... so someone would react well to a stranger.
- You're welcome! - Smile, said Lear.

After drinking the tea, people felt weak and almost immediately also passed out. He woke up tied to a couch. The room was dark, there was blood everywhere, and nearby was a Lear in medical coats ... So is the feeling that something is missing ...

- H-hey! What's going on? - Shouted the man.
- Take it easy. I needed only your hands.

People hardly looked around and saw a pool of blood. Looking at his hands, he saw that he had no hands ...

- What have you done to me?
- Do not worry. I only need your hands. - She said.
- But, I'll be without them? ..
- Do not worry. You quickly get used to it.
- Let me ... please ...
- Silly! - Lear published a small chuckle. - I can not let you go! Otherwise, you can learn about Celestia.
- What is the same now? ..
- Now you will be my slave.

After that, Lyra turned off the light and left. That same day, on a visit to Lira came Twilight.

- Hello, Lyra! I noticed an unusual phenomenon here, last night. That's why I'm here.
- Hey, Twilight. Yeah, come on ... I want to show you something. - Lyra smiled slyly.

Once inside, Twilight noticed a strange contraption in a glass flask.

- Hey, Lyra! What is this? - Twilight pointed to the flask.
- Oh, it's once again what I said! Now I have hands!
- But where are they?
- You know ... suddenly appeared.

Twilight heard a strange sound that came from below.

- You hear that, too?
- Yes ... I simply cook muffins ... on the stove.
- Ah, well ... then fine.

Twilight is gone, and Lyra quickly locked the door and went back to the lab. Of nowhere there appeared Pinky.

- W-what are you doing here?
- I do not know! Oh, what it dear! Hey, can I have some of it cut off, eh?
- Are you that already know everything? ..
- Of course the same, silly! - Pinky just laughed.
- Please do not tell anyone about this ...
- I swear, if I say lies - keksik the eye itself to slide.
- Oh-oh ... Okay. Go now, and something I still here to watch him.

***

This evening, Twilight came to Rarita guests ...

- Look, I think that there is something Lyra home ... strange.
- Where did you get it, dear?
- The bank it is a strange place, and she says it's hands. And so did she hear strange noises from somewhere.
- Do not worry, dear. I'll go up to her and find out all by herself.
- No! - Shouted Twilight. - It is better to quietly sneak and come to her house ...
- But, Twilight, it's also rude!
- Otherwise, nothing will happen.

***

At night, the Rarita secretly snuck into the house of Lyra. All was quiet, was heard only rarely quiet snore. Only she was about to enter a room, as Lyra suddenly hit her on the head with a frying pan. Awoke she was tied to the wall ...

- Hey, what are you going to do? .. - Shouted Rarita.
- Sorry, but I do not want you to tell everyone that might see.
- Let me go, please! I will not tell anyone!
- Too late ...

Lyra took her melenko knife and slowly stick it in the body of a white edinorozhki. She touched her veins ...

- No! Stop it, stop it! - Screaming in pain Rarita.

Lear was not going to stop. She carefully drove a knife inside her, cutting her artery. He pulled a knife, she stabbed him in the throat Rarita, and began to drive back inside ...

Edinorozhka difficult to cough up blood, gasping. Lear also continued to drive a scalpel inside her. The eyes of the poor Rarita already began to decline ...

At the last moment, Lyra stuck a knife into her heart.

- Much better. - Said Lear.

The man looked with horror at all this and the dead edinorozhku.

- Okay, I'll leave you here ...

***

Lear took the bag in the morning, and with difficulty, shoved there Rarita to throw. Went a little farther from home, it also immediately greeted Twilight.

- Hello, Lyra. - The beginning of Twilight. - What's in your bag?
- Just rubbish. - Once also said Lear.
- It is strange that it is so much ...
- Well, I'm ... just really have not cleaned.
- Well, good-by ... - Just said thoughtfully Twilight.

Twilight went for Lyra, she also tried to somehow get rid of it ...

- Hey, do not you have anything to do?
- Sorry, I'm stopping you?
- Not at all, just ...
- I know that you killed Rarita. - Interrupted Twilight.
- I'm sorry, T-tvayi ~ - she began hesitantly. - I do not know what came over me ...
- It's okay. Come on, I'll take you home.
- A. .. as the same body? ..
- Keep it at home.
- Okay ...

***

Twilight spent Lear home ...

- Do not worry, Lira. I'll try to keep your secret, but ... Why did you do it?
- Well, you must understand, though, I really do not want to! ..
- It's something to do with these 'hands'?
- No.
- Okay, I believe you. Then I think I'll leave you alone ...

Lyra lay down and began to realize what she has done.

- Why do the same I did it! - Weeping, she cried.

To her house went Bon-Bon, and seeing his girlfriend, she also immediately ran to her.

- Lira! What is it? Are you okay? - And suddenly she noticed something strange in the bank on the shelf. - At '... this is what I think? ..
- Yes, these are the hands ... And I hold you a man ...

She spent her friend to the lab, where the couch was chained men. Bon-Bon with horror at this ...

- Lear ... - Trembling voice said Bon-Bon. - What did you do? ..
- I'm sorry, I did not mean ... - Head down, said Lear.
- Oh-oh ... No problem, we'll just tell all Celestia and then the problem will be solved! I'm sure she'll understand! ..
- No, I will not let you!

After that Lyra pushed Bon-Bon and levitate knife pounced on his girlfriend. It is a sharp stroke cut her tongue. Unhappy BonBon tried to crawl away, but because of blood loss and shock, she was very weakened and lost consciousness.

- Poor ... Let me help you ... - Then she stuck the knife into her head, getting into the brain. - Believe me, it would be better ...

Lear now have to think where to put the same body Bon-Bon. And in the end she decided to bury him next to his house. Fluttershy came by and happened to notice it.

Burying the corpse, she was off somewhere ... is stupid forgetting to close the door of his house. Fluttershy went inside and went to the 'laboratory' Lyra. She was shocked by what she saw ... strange creature was riveted to the couch, and he had a mouth gag. Fluttershy gently removed her gag ...

- Save me from this crazy pony! - Hardly a man shouted. - She cut off my arms, and now holds here! ..
- Do not worry, I'll help you ... - Fluttershy said quietly.
- You untie and let me go? .. - A little relieved man asked.
- No. I just help you to die quickly ...
- What? Why!
- Then all will be well. Nobody will know and Lyra not to go into exile ... Everything will be as before ...
- You, that want it to get away with it ~ hooves?
- Hush-hush ... I puncture your medicine and you just go to sleep ...

Fluttershy took a syringe with drugs and went to the man who is ready to make him an injection of sedative.

- Do not fight it, so it went faster ... If you do not mind ...

Man adrenalin hit in the head, and he abruptly pulled out of the shackles, pushing pegasku why syringe with sedative injected into it.

- I'm sorry, I did not mean ...

Fluttershy looked at the man tearful eyes.

- All right ... I. .. was ... guess ... - Sharp breath, she said.

He wished to look at her. Her eyes have become blurred, and the already slow breathing began to disappear ...

Teeth he took the blanket to cover her body to them. After that, he ran out of Lyra and ran toward the giant oak.

He quickly ran inside and saw four ponies. Saw the man, they opened their mouths in astonishment.

- Who are you? - Twilight first came to.
- Save me! Some crazy green pony cut my hands, and then locked up!
- So that's where it has the strangest thing in the bank ... I should have guessed.

- She also killed some white unicorn, as well as yellow, with blue and pink mane ...
- What a mess! Do not worry, we'll hide you from her! We need to think ... Dash lives in the clouds, where you can not get into. Pinky lives in the store with Mr. and Mrs. Keiko. My library is not an option ... But I think that you can live with Epldzhek Farm!

Epldzhek agreed and took man to the farm, introduced him to his family, and then took him to the barn.

***

Eplblum night heard strange and scary sounds ... Coming out of her room, she came to his dead sister, which protruded from the back of the rake and nails sticking out of his head.

Lear angrily looked at Eplblum.

- Tell me, where do you hide it? - She asked angrily.
- Oh, he's a-shed ... - Stuttering Eplblum said.

Man saw Lyra, looking out the window and decided to run out through the other window. Lear also also saw him and ran after him. So he ran away from it until you got to the house of Lyra, who came in Twilight. Lyra ran to his house, but it was too late. Twilight has already gone in her lab, and also saw a dead Fluttershy.

- I knew it! - Twilight yelled, then turned to Lyra. - Why? Why did you cut off his hand? Why are you holding him captive? ..
- ... And what killed those ponies! - Added the man.

Lyra looked mournfully at the first Twilight, and then a man. She lowered her head and went to the table, I drank a bottle home.

- Lira! - Shouted lavender edinorozhka. - Why do you even do that?
- Excuse me ... - Hard to say she began to cry, then turned to the man. - Ask-a-minute ... - After she staggered and fell down dead.

The man with the little bit of sadness at her.

- Do not worry - it's over. - Said Twilight person. - We'll give you hands and went back. No one will know what.
- What about the dead pony? .. - Asked people.
- Do not worry about it ...

Man sewed back hands, and then, and returned it back, presumably in his world by magic ...

Comments

[Protestifications]

just no

[-Twilight]

1 Too many grammar errors
2 Too many punctuation errors
3 you need to use "these" when making a character talk
4 Lear?
5 hyphens are not used to speak this is not a play, and even in a play that would be wrong (see 3)
hoped this helped

[Pirate Jesus]

4242836
Could be the fact that you like his story, so some of the down votes from your story infected this one.

[Pirate Jesus]

So, I just read this, and the story didn't piss me off, which is a bigger compliment than it seems given how prone to grammar nazi and format communist behavior I can be.

That said, your grammar and punctuation is heavily skewed, which makes the whole story a bit of a slog to read through. However, the big problem I saw is after the first few sentences I cease to make any sense of what the hell is going on. I got so confused that I started watering my fish and feeding my plant. I'd say you should find an editor to help clear some of this up and go through another couple outlines of the plot to make it more coherent.

All in all, though, at least it looks like you tried an honest effort. You just need some assistance with grammar and making the story more streamlined.

[tuominen03]

Beautiful story 10/10

[JumpingShinyFrogs]

I don't understand this...at all. What happened exactly? It seems like google translate didn't quite finish its job this time around.

[Ice Star]

I'm scared.

The grammar...it hurts.