Very nice. Was excited when bats told me who was writing this.

Y U NO write more twidash?

Also, someone's mouth being referred to as a ballroom is a first for me.

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Thank you for writing this. You are awesome.

1836125 It was a great delight writing it. Thanks for the feedback!

1836243 Yeah, I kinda have motivational issues. I'm shawwy...

1836265 Thanks for writing the original story and your other one. You're awesome, too.

I like it! Sensual and sexy!

Keep it up, big boy

Not a huge fan of clopfics (they usally are the equivalent of bad porn, well, they are) but this was a beautifull story spun off a amazing tale. I belive a mustache is in order. And a thumbs up.

it was good, i am a big fan of twidash and this was spot on.

How did I find this story only like.... few days ago?
This deserves way more views than it has so far, great read before sleep

Let me be your 100th like.

No. Not half your time, but 1/4. You just say 1/2 to make yourself feel better.

Great work, I must say!

1836702 Your profile pic scares me. O.o

Tentatively, Rainbow reached out with her tongue to brush it against Twilight’s delicate outer folds. Unprepared for the unexpected sensation, Rainbow cringed and pulled back slightly, running her tongue around her mouth to get acquiesced with the unfamiliar taste. It had a salty, bitter quality to it, with a slight hint of what she eventually identified as an elderberry aftertaste. She swallowed and looked back down towards Twilight.

Does that mean rainbow dash is a hamster?