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cynthash
I'm a pega-sister that <3s poniezzz!
cynthash
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Doing good so far, keep up the great work
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Thankies! I'm going to add to it as soon as it's approved.
I was about to yell at you for capslock, but then I realized it was in context.
Okay.... second chapter you use capslock frequently. I am disappoint.
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I'm sorry that you don't like it. I'll try to keep them a little more sparse, but I was really trying to show Cynthia's shock at Equestria in this chapter. Future chapters will be somewhat... more collegial in their English usage.
1752802 I like it, but in general capslock is a bad way of showing anything. You can't just rely on dialogue for everything; it just wont work. Try using more flavor text. You want to explain her feelings, not just have her scream and hope we get that she's shocked as hell.
read first chapter not shure if like or dislike
read second chapter still not shure if like
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This will be long, and it will be a story with many facets. I hope you like what's to come.
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How's the third chapter, as far as this 'flavor text' goes? I/m not even quite sure if I know what you mean, so I'm sorry if it isn't quite there yet. I tried to use non-dialogue descriptions more. :)
I am liking this story so far. Keep up the great work.
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Sorry I haven't updated it in a bit. I was depressed there, too much to even write
.... Unemployment will do that to ya
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1844452try owning your own business this time of the year, tattooing and graphic art work doesnt do much in the line of paying bills right now.
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1845457 *HUGS* If I could donate some money to help you in the meantime, I would. Im already late on a car payment and insurance as is. However if I win the lottery Wednesday, I shall send you $100,000
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*hugs*
1849097 need more updates!!!!!! please!!!!
1921823Okay, Okay...
I've been kinda... busy for the last little bit... between a bf, and a new addition to our family(yes, another girl decided she might want in on our open relationship)... I haven't given a lot of thought to this...
I'll try, I promise!
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I guess I really went for the soap-opera feel with this. Or maybe that's the destiny of all tragedies? IDK, but this chapter was fun to write!
This is the beginning of the end of this story, and marks the beginning of a new phase in the events to unfold. Can't wait to see them with you all! n.n
I don't know why the downvotes; anyone want to give me some feedback? Please?
Not bad. Keep up the great work. I dont visit this site but maybe once or twice a year now so I figured id check up on ya. If youre on Xbox my gamer tag is Furstreak. Im always online even if I show offline. I hide a lot. Hit me up on there if possible.