It isn't the things we regret in life that we mourn for, the enemies we made, the friendships lost, but the things we didn't do in life, the friends we didn't make, the lives we never touched.
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Fluttrick
Life is short and so are my stories. Enjoy!
Fluttrick
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F-F-FIRST lolol. but yeah, i'll see where this goes. i always liked this concept. how RD gets into the wonderbolts, and its not what it turns out to be, since you know... busy as hell. fav'd and liked
1723194 Dude, don't. You make the rest of s look bad.
1723203 Seriously now I've got to wait like another ten minutes to enact my 'Master Plan'.
Also Double space dem paragraphs, needs separation.
1723210
I think I like where this is going, though a little more detail on how Rainbow got into the Wonderbolts in the first place would be appreciated. The whole plot felt a bit...vague and hard to follow, skipping from one event to the next. A little more detail and transition would be great
. Other than that, I enjoyed the overall concept, and so far, you're capturing it well by my standards 
. Thumbs up, looking forward to seeing what's next 
.
Fillies are girl ponies man. Don't call a filly a 'he'.
I like the idea
but its just over 1000 words 
. That's very short, and an introduction like this sounds like the story could go the distance. I would prefer a longer chapter.
Congratulations on 13 upvotes.
I think I see where this is going...
This is both a good and bad thing for a first chapter to do, though this gets my upvote and a fav so I can watch it carefully.
Hey, great job, man! I'll be watching this closely...
1723194 Thanks, and congrats with the first thing
1723210 Okay, I'll try to remember next chapter.
1723409 There will be a section in the next chapter, or an entire chapter devoted to that event that I'll write so don't worry. And I'm sorry the plot seems hard to follow, I was just up at 12:00 AM typing this, so I guess I couldn't think that straight
1723632 I was just so eager to get this fiction up. Sorry.
1723947 Thanks man!
1724119 I'll try not to disappoint
1724443 I'm sure you will
1724979
You are welcome!
1724979 That's perfectly understandable
Alright, this looks promising!
TRacking/faving this because Fluttrick, and I like where this is going xD
I will stalk-I uhh. . .mean favorite this story so I can read the next chapter!