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Fluttrick


Life is short and so are my stories. Enjoy!

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When Luffy gives chase to his air born straw hat, he ends up in Equestria. How will he cope with his new environment? Will he remain the carefree pirate he is, or will he turn into a lifeless drone upon hearing that there's no meat as he makes some new friends.

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Yes.....That's all I can just say yes and I look forward to more.

There was a another one just like this like 10 houses ago now we can see how it stacks up

also double tap enter after each diffrent speaking roll

I really love One Piece, and by that I realize that Luffy is a little OOC since he can be as or more random than Pinkie :pinkiehappy:, and that he didn´t say "SO COOOOL!" after seen Scootalo wings or the talkinig ponies.
But I actually like a lot the Story :rainbowkiss: (It doesnt have any sense, and thats what i like), and im waiting for MOAR, so please continue.

413865 Oh yeah, that guy inspired me to write this. And just tell me if I made any mistakes, and one more thing, 413886 I was going to put how he says that, and that their so cute, meh, I'll add it somewhere now! :pinkiesmile:

Wow sudden influx of One Piece fics.

413979 As I said before, inspired by my friend who also wrote a One Piece fiction today. Something like My Little Pirates or something like that. :derpytongue2:

I for one welcome as many One Piece crossovers as possible, how else will other bronies realize what the second awesomest thing in the world is? :pinkiehappy: (actually, I'm kinda debating whether I like ponies or OP better. Ponies have the unfair advantage of having a massive internet and fanfic community for me to enjoy, so it's a hard choice)

414069 we need deathbattles to decide

I love One Piece, but I think anybody without familiarity with the series is going to be seriously lost right from your opening scenes onwards. There's no character descriptions, no explanation at all about how what he's yelling in bold caps relates to what he's doing (or even that his arm is stretching, just that he "threw his hand". :rainbowhuh: ). Gum Gum Machine Gun? Gear Second? No description of what's actually happening. You're telling us, but not showing us. The meeting with the Cutie Mark Crusaders would have been a belated but still welcome opportunity to at least tell your readers that Luffy's a rubber man, which could have gone a long way to explaining how he survived falling through the trees after being shot out of a cannon! Maybe even the point where Usopp shot him in the first place... show WHY they're not worried about shooting him out of a cannon? Dunno. Just suggestions! :twilightsmile:

The idea is interesting but this needs a heckuva lot more work.

414148 Okiedokie, be right on it!:pinkiehappy:

414148
I aggre, characterization is need for no OP fans or at least No OP knowers (Like the fact that Luffy is a Rubber Super Human), but also is labbeled RANDOM because it doesn´t necessary have to had sense at all, like the fact he is shoot from a cannon, Luffy had done really reckless thinks in his life (as a kid he fighter with aligators and gorilas even whan he couldn´t win them, and in his young years he always finished doing something stupid just because it was fun, like wasting 4 or 6 hours looking for an Hecarles Beetle) and that makes that part of the fic not so imposible.

Well I'm making an extra chapter for everybrony who had none or little knowledge of One Piece.:pinkiehappy:

Not bad, I was wondering when there was going to be a One Piece cross-over. I'll also have to check out the fic that inspired this one.

414251 Oh fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

414251Did he come before or after Robin and Franky?

414208 That's an awesome idea! It would be harsh reading this fic otherwise, it's hard to appreciate a good crossover when you have no idea what it's about. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowhuh: Weird idea just occurred to me, shipping OP characters with ponies. Not that I, or probably anyone for that matter, will, but the idea just occurred and I was like, "Woah, bad idea, but oddly enticing. The internet will want to have it." :trollestia:

Ramble courtesy of Shipping Inc. © All rights reserved. :ajbemused:

he wouldn't get knocked out by that he is immune to blunt force trauma

Wait wha-?:pinkiegasp: Silly bunny! Luffy wouldn't get knocked out by getting slammed into the ground!:twilightsmile: He'd just bounce because of the rubber. Blunt attacks harldy effect Luffy unless they're super strong or Haki-powered. Hmm... Actually that's a good idea. Making powerful unicorns (and maybe Flutershy's Stare) have the same effect as Haki that is. But otherwise, good job. Maybe flesh out the details a bit more. Like at least 1k+ per chapter maybe. I'll be looking forward to MOOOAAARRR!:flutterrage:

TWILIGHT, NOOOOOOOOO!!!

I dont think he would be knoed out by that I mean his head has been hit harder and he bounced back like well rubber sorry for the pun

I changed the ending of Monster, just to say.

414309 Agreed,but not magic which was what slammed him to the ground.

"Loop Holes, When You Can't Find Them Make Them."
:pinkiehappy:

For those who want a better idea of One Piece watch some of these videos.

MUST....READ....MOOOOOOORE!!!!


Gimme moar please!

Robin can also make herself grow out after the time skip
Brook is also has the power to control souls in a sense
And Chopper can alternate forms.
You also forgot to mention these three ate devil fruits.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE FIRST

also dear god man put spaces between each perosn talking

like this

its easier on the eyes

Sleep spell, always make sure you know at least one.

I just see a wall of text, SPACES PLEASE:flutterrage:
Also the story seems to be rushed.
Hope you improve:twilightsmile:

OHMAHGAWD. YOU HAVE BEEN CONTAMINATED WITH THE WALL OF TEXT SYNDROME! QUARANTINE QUARANTINE!!!

423124 it may have taken about 10 mins but chapter 1 is finally spaced.:ajsleepy:

at least I still someone else likes One Piece
what will Luffy help the CMC with? being pirates?

for the sake of sanity, why this have to be so short?????

why can't u just have put this in a blog entry?

423246 o sauce...what teh One Piece crew would do with them only Celestia knows
423259 where ya find that OC?

425349

Searching through google and Click Here

425493 that just leads me to a 21 page list
don't have the time to sort through that

425526 like I said, I've went there and I'd also used google image search to help me find them. :pinkiehappy:

If your just looking for the oc, I typed " nami pony" in the google search engine.

cool>>425636

this story actually inspired me to watch some One Piece>>425729

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