• Member Since 6th Jan, 2012
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Fluttrick


Life is short and so are my stories. Enjoy!

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What happens when the mane 5 lose the kindness in their lives? How will they cope with the loss and cruel trick of death as Twilight learns a lesson that goes well beyond the magic of friendship.
(My first fanfiction, so enjoy!) And please read the description before reading and hate commenting me. Thanks!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Hey Guys! I'm back! I just decided to add all the chapters together, and I have an even bigger decision I have to make, though I would like all your opinions before I make it.
I was thinking of remaking this fiction, seeing all the bad grammar, and comparing it to my fictions today, I wanted to make my first fiction even better, and so, I want all your opinions as to if I should or shouldn't remake it.
Fluttrick

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I..... would probably say, don't remake it, you can if you want to, I mean yeah you can just re-do it and correct the mistakes you made but what's the point of that? For me I guess it would be good to leave it as is, that way you can always look back at your first fic, and see how you started off and how you've improved over time.
But then that's just my opinion, there are still others =P

814338 Okiedokielokie! Thanks for your opinion!:pinkiehappy:

814717 Sure thing! :moustache:

845012 Okay then, I guess that's two for no and 1 for yes.

Almost broke me :fluttershyouch: well done

888468 Thanks! And the number of view isn't correct, I just added all the chapters together 'cause they were like 500 words each. It was my first fiction.

well... i cried...:fluttercry:

When the video that says "Not availible," play http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=so6ExplQlaY.

I am sorry your dad passed.

2819221 Thx! And it's fine. Really.

The only thing wrong with this are the TEXT WALLS

3255008 Weeeeeeeeeeellllllllll, this was my first fiction. I didn't wanna change it. But I did...:pinkiesad2: by putting all the chapters into one. Sorry about that.

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: that. was. BEAUTIFUL!!!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair:

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