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Equestrian Breaker


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Moon's Favor is a short, tragic comedy involving three main parties - Anonymous the Human, Luna, and Celestia. As it stands, Anonymous is in Canterlot as guest to the Royal Sisters. There, he describes the many facets of humanity to the intrigued Alicorn audience. This story focuses on one particular day, where the subject of celestial spheres arises. As Celestia finds herself more and more pleased with Anonymous' tales, Luna becomes depressed. As Anonymous tries to convince her controlling the Moon is not all bad, he devises a surefire way to help Luna win the hearts of her people. Little does he know, the end result could have catastrophic consequences.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

The amount of Anon. My god, so much Anon. I live Anon. I breath Anon. I am one with the Anon.

Also, indent your paragraphs.

read this, saw you didn't get first comment, came back and still lost!

Is this guy from the future or something? Because the 2nd is tomorrow. :rainbowhuh: HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE?

Totally worth it.
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Wait a minute....
If the sun and moon are the same distance from each other, then that would mean that either the sun is much smaller and closer, or the moon is fucking huge and much farther away.

Either way, I don't think it would cause this.

1723290

I'm not entirely sure what you mean. In this Equestrian setting, the Sun and Moon are the exact same size, shape, mass, and distance away from the Earth.

1722870

Done-zo. Wasn't sure what the preferred format was.

1723543 If they're the same distance away how did Luna not ram the moon into the sun?

1724107

Fair enough. I should put a "nearly" in there. One with slightly more distance and more mass, one with slightly less distance and less mass.

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