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Christophe


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Sheoth the Undead master of Demonology, botches his summoning ritual and ends up in Equestria. The humans there lack the prejudices of Azeroth but also lack the multitudes of other races. He is more than willing to deal with that if it means not being brutally killed on a regular basis anymore.

A WoW and humanoid MLP Crossover of my violently insane warlock.

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Requests and suggestions are welcome, just drop me a line anywhere you can reach me.

The image is one I commissioned about two years ago based on my warlock.

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I normally don't read humanized storys but i overlooked it in the description and now i like it, it feels strange.
He seems a bit chinese there if you don't know what i mean google the chinese undead models :pinkiehappy: (except they still have the claws).
Oh and for the Alliance you Horde scum! Hunter for life! Shooting people magical exploding arrows in the face is funny.

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Yeah I know about the undead not being able to show bones and such, the logic behind this is related to the harmonic nature of Equestria. Its like how undead priests are more angry than other undead, or are pessimistic. The close they are to the light the more feeling they have so and undead priest can feel the decay, taste the rot, and smell the foulness more than the average Forsaken. The shear concentrationm of positive magic is pulling him to a near living state, but taking damage will revert him back to the decayed form. The image however was just my spin on how I wanted my Lock to look with some artist spin.

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*Attention lore nazi at work*
Actually the Holy aspect of undead priests is pure game mechanic because the light harms everything undead or demonic. The reason why undead priests that still believed in the light after they were risen where so angry and hateful of everything is because they think the light had forsaken them. Undead beings can only be healed by shadow magic and are harmed by the light even if it would heal living beings, for living beings it is the exact opposite. And im talking about shadow magic as in the Cult of Forgotten Shadow which is in essence the opposite of the Church of the Holy Light.

The idea that the positive magic of Equestria is "forcing" him to look more alive is a cool concept, are these changes permanent or do they fade when he isn't exposed to it anymore?

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See I have always been told how I explained it. As for the changes no they aren't permanent only situational, consider it like proximity to the elements (etc...). If he were to say go somewhere without harmony/the light, be hurt badly enough, or deal with some kind of intense negative emotion, he would decay again. Also, fits of insanity would count towards a decayed state.

He's a warlock and a Forsaken...and yet he's relatively cheerful and friendly. It's mood whiplash. In-game Forsaken are sociopathic nutjobs, and warlocks tend to be grim and forbidding. He's...simply waaaay too cheerful for a warlock and a hardened adventurer.

Certainly, I can't imagine a warlock comforting Fluttershy. Curtly pointing out the flaws in her argument, yes, but the sappiness above is sort of unrealistic.

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Think about it this way. Right you are correct about nutjob thing, the diamond dog thing speaks for that. The Undead are spiteful and depressing because they envy or hate the living. Now he is close to being alive again and can actually feel the positive side of things without the soul crushing despair. Besides, nothing with a minute amount of soul could resist comforting Fluttershy, that is a known fact.

OCs as in pony OCs or also other OCs :pinkiehappy:.
Also if you have him using spells and specific mechanics try to not describe them as you would use them ingame.
Like for example the part where he switched from Kj's cunning to Mannos fury, try to describe a bit more poetic, like he has to sever his connection to the lingering traces of Kil'jaedens presence in the nether to begin drawing from the remaining fragments of Mannoroths power.
If you continue to describe it like you would describe a gaming session to someone it's not very engaging.

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I like that presence thing, I'll edit that a bit before next chapter. Also, I don't discriminate on OCs. The only problem might be how to work them in. If you want me to try shoot me a message.

Edited slightly thanks to some friendly advise from Cadmium.

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I'll work on it I promise, I've got a lot of stories buzzing around in my head. Not to mention trying to get a Brawlers guild invitation on WoW. Back to the point, I'll work on it.

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