Finding themselves in the world of Team Fortress 2, the Mane 6 must fit in to survive and find their way out. But their skills will be tested, especially with lots of haters hating on the ponies for being who they are.
WARNING: This story will show the Mane 6 being on the more OOC side behaving more like warriors rather than just themselves. They will, however, maintain some characteristics that pertain to them (EX. Fluttershy will still be erratic at times but she also gets very nervous about fighting.)
(I could also use some critiquing on the story as well, if you guys don't mind)
Many thanks to Zaner-Boy from Steam for helping me with the editing and revising of the story!
Chapters (8)
Well written, I couldn't see any glaringly obvious errors. You could have made these two chapters into a single chapter though. 4/5 and a track.
123417 Thanks! :) Though, I shouldn't take all of the credit because my friend on steam helped me with some editing with this
And I guess you're right about combining the chapters. But I don't want to make them too long because I know there are some people that would rather read short chapters, so they could take breaks from stories in between each chapter, rather than incredibly long ones, where they'll have to find out where they left off if they actually had to take a break for some reason. So I think I'll have wait and see about this
123594 That friend would be me.
124586 Hey, Zaner! Looks like you made an account after all
"I tried to calm her down but.... she get really mad at me."
I think you mean, "She 'got' really mad". That was the only error I found in one read. Well done, another good chapter.
Pinkie pyro is best pyro
I like it, though I may be biased considering I am a tf2 fan
126363 Oh, alright, thanks for notifying me ^^
126416 Lol, she is indeed the best pyro! And thanks! TF2 is an awesome game isn't it?
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There's a spah around her
142146 Lol, cool! Of course, Pyro is actually a pretty easy class to use if you know all of the pyro's tricks. Used to be my best class until I decided to go heavy
im best with medic
Awwww yeah. I wish people on TF2 weren't so bad... I never have any challenge. I just sit there racking up kills.
(No, I am not a god-damn camping engie. Pocket solly all the way.)
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Lol, I know that feeling sometimes! Especially when I am playing as a heavy with a medic and we are overwhelming the other team. If that happens, I just usually screw around and not contribute at all, just to see if the opposing team could get a chance to win. Or sometimes when I feel like I'm in a silly mode, I just convince everyone to go the same class. Like this one time, I played on a Pony Fortress server and we all decided to play as scout and only used our melee weapons. Then we all went Demoman, Soldier, Engineer, Medic, Heavy, and Pyro (so long as we were all the same class). And once it was the Sniper's turn, we all just took out our huntsman, lined up like the Redcots did in the Revolutionary war, and fired our bows all at once. Surprisingly, it was very effective :P. Of course, the only successful win was by the Heavy. Pyro, Soldier, and Sniper all ended in stalemates and the other classes ended up in us losing :P. But hey, it was all in good fun.
Im best as a sniper
huntsman preferably
159995 i was there for that good times
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You had to make this irresistable. You took 2 of my favourite things, and wrote a story about it. E-salute to you, sir or madam.
Nice to see that this is still being updated. I hope you can write more stuff .
Im from the south, and I'd say AJ's dialouge is spot on
660897 Lol, thanks! And I'm a guy I hope you know :P
661341 I will! Don't worry :). But I do have to worry about High School as well, unfortunately. Oh, and thanks for the comment!
662608 Actually, someone who is an editor to this (who's probably from the south. I'm not sure how else he can manage to be on expert at southern accents) fixed AJ's dialogue for me. Just something you might want to know :)
I'm calling this now: RED's behind everything.