• Member Since 31st Dec, 2011
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StrappingYoungLad


Comments ( 4 )
goo

I suppose it is an interesting idea, but we need plot to make it work!

Ah the WBC, I am so glad that I live in Germany with an entire ocean and a few countries between me and those *bleep*

Goo is right tough, this could become a great story about teaching those racists a few things about tolerance, kindness and equality especially when Celestia gets involved and they hear what big morons they are from the goddess herself.

Fan fiction and trying to address real world problems generally don't mix, and this really isn't an exception to that idea either.

Hmm... at first I was like... whats the big deal with the low rating? Then I read some of it and just thought it was boring and uninteresting and then I came to the racist part and I guess thats why people dislike it so much? I dunno... the story was very uninteresting with no drive whatsoever as to why I should continue reading it or even care for the story. But I must say; this story only reminds me of how stupid religion really are (any and all of them, no excuses) and all of the people that believe in such BS.

I guess you could do something with the idea, but this as a story on its own was not really worth the time spend on reading it, no offense.

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