• Member Since 15th Nov, 2012
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FaelaArts


You are the most talented, most interesting, and most extraordinary person in the universe. And you are capable of amazing things. Because you are the reader. And you bring our worlds to life.

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Twilight was enjoying her birthday in Ponyville, everything was perfect, even the princesses were there. However something happened and suddenly she has awoken in a strange building where everything seems upside down. And how is her favorite toy Smartie Pants alive? Just what has happened to the world she knows and loves? She is going to have to come to terms with the different land, and just how much had changed from the Equestria she knows and loves. But maybe, she can find someone who knows where, and what Ponyville is.

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I love critique so if you feel I'm not portraying someone right, or anything else please speak now. I can only improve if you don't hesitate to move.
Also if you dislike, please tell me why. I can't improve if you don't tell me what I did wrong.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 4 )

Sorry I Couldn't read it because its all to close together, you need to space the lines better because it makes it seem daunting and long.

I'm not sure what to make of this yet, so ill reserved judgement until future chapters arrive

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Will do right now

DAMMIT Greenglow, Stop changing genders.
Dammit Keys, when I press 'ed' I expect an 'ed' to appear. :facehoof:
Also, enjoy this early chapter, and excuse the late chapter yesterday-or this morning about 10 hours ago depending on where you are in the world.

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