Sweetie Belle decides to go gem hunting despite the protests of the other CMC, and knowledge hidden away from the time of Discord. Inspired by purpose, and in part by Let your mane down by D.Notive.
1: Scootaloo 2: Rumble 3: Sweetie Belle 4: Apple Bloom 5: Fluttershy
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You know, this could be a start to a bigger, more drawn out story. Perhaps you could expand this to accommodate a somewhat adventurous plot line; what do you think? It'd be an interesting experience to see Sweetie become the next Twilight Sparkle in my opinion.
EDIT: Now that I've looked at your user page, I can see you actually intend to continue with this general concept. Just make sure to be more descriptive and precise in your writing. It'd help readers identify with your characters if you actually put little more drama into your stories.
1900063 It actually is part of a larger story. "Magic of the Filly", The Sweetie Storyline of "Crusaders: One With Their Kind" I've just had some tech difficulty with completing it.
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Yeah, I pretty much found out when I looked up your user page. I've read and favorited all your stories thus far, and look forward to more.
A rather interesting place to leave it. Very esoteric.
You could still get a huge epic adventure out of this, but leaving it where it is is nice too.
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Hehe I get this message a lot actually. I am continuing this series, as this will intertwine with my other series and the one to follow
This story is actually incomplete.