• Member Since 2nd Mar, 2015
  • offline last seen Oct 22nd, 2017

Appleglenn


Just a middle-aged brony trying to bring something to the fandom.

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From a writing challenge by Kifstopher. Write a one-shot that includes the following: 
-Sweetie Belle 
-Pillows 
-A Potion 
-A Clock 
-Hugs.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 5 )

Heh, nice Wonka reference.

Oh and a typo:

“Why o why Sweetie did you ever have to drink that silly potion.

Should be "oh" not "o"

Feels point, nothing much happens then everything just goes back to normal, but at least its well written

Only her voice wasn't it's usual squeaky self.

*its

she certainly would of smashed things

*have

she still couldn't figure out how do make herself burp.

*to

Best fan Fic I read all day:ajsmug:

This fanfic was funny. XD

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