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Radiogenicpony


1: Scootaloo 2: Rumble 3: Sweetie Belle 4: Apple Bloom 5: Fluttershy

New Scootaloo Group

Dec
5th
2013

not dead just writers block · 4:56am Dec 5th, 2013

yeah long lasting writers block on 14 stories so there

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I jioined your group about Scootaloon learning to fly, but why are there no comments?

Looking at your stories, you really should consolidate them. Each is more a chapter of a larger story than a story in its own right.

Now that I've read all six of your stories, I'd have to say I'll be looking forward to more of them. There are a few things I'd like to point out though; First, learn to use proper Indentation and double-spacing. Second, make sure to go back and see If you've made any spelling errors. And third, you have the option of making updates to stories---don't just automatically say a story is done when you can add new chapters to an existing story.

I'm hoping to see more in the future, hopefully it'll help me learn how to write a story of my own. Perhaps we can push ourselves into becoming better versed in the field of writing!

Well, I haven't really done anything to garner comments aside from editing your stories. I'm looking to expand my talents and edit for other authors (and man up and actually finish one of the five or so stories I'm juggling writing), but it's slow going.

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