My Sister, ScootalooContinually quarreling with her surrogate sister Scootaloo, Dash consults a veteran on the subject for help.by NavelColt
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My Sister, LoyaltySweetie Belle has Rarity, Apple Bloom has Applejack, but does anypony care for Scootaloo on a cold, stormy night?by NavelColt
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A Matter of PerspectiveAfter a training session with Rainbow Dash went bad, Scootaloo finds some unexpected comfort.by NTL
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Applejack's BarAgainst her wishes, Applejack is forced to operate a bar.by Alaborn
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Dance!Scootaloo tries dancing and maybe ends up covered in tree sap.by OnTheMoon
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My Little DashieWhat would you do if you found a Filly Rainbow Dash in a box?by ROBCakeran53
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Learning to FallScootaloo gets partial advice from Fluttershy about how to fly, but blows off Fluttershy's trainingby Radiogenicpony
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Gliding Through DreamsScootaloo had an eventful day learning to glide she can't get to sleep as she feels the need to flyby Radiogenicpony
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With a few Small FlapsScoots now knows her reason to fly, but she doesn't know where she is. she must fly to find her wayby Radiogenicpony
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A Flight to LastEndurance. This is the key to sustained flight. Scootaloo must now learn endurance with ease.by Radiogenicpony
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Truly AirborneAs Scoots finishes her flight training, she still has many questions. She seeks knowledge from RD.by Radiogenicpony
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Magic of the Filly
Knowledge of the Gem FieldSweetie Belle decides to go gem hunting despite the protests of the other CMC, and finds knowledge.by Radiogenicpony
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Pupil of InstinctSweetie must figure out her reason for magic, but is the key ahead of her, or behind? Only time or memories can tell.by Radiogenicpony
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Now that I've read all six of your stories, I'd have to say I'll be looking forward to more of them. There are a few things I'd like to point out though; First, learn to use proper Indentation and double-spacing. Second, make sure to go back and see If you've made any spelling errors. And third, you have the option of making updates to stories---don't just automatically say a story is done when you can add new chapters to an existing story.
I'm hoping to see more in the future, hopefully it'll help me learn how to write a story of my own. Perhaps we can push ourselves into becoming better versed in the field of writing!
Well, I haven't really done anything to garner comments aside from editing your stories. I'm looking to expand my talents and edit for other authors (and man up and actually finish one of the five or so stories I'm juggling writing), but it's slow going.
I jioined your group about Scootaloon learning to fly, but why are there no comments?
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Looking at your stories, you really should consolidate them. Each is more a chapter of a larger story than a story in its own right.
Now that I've read all six of your stories, I'd have to say I'll be looking forward to more of them. There are a few things I'd like to point out though; First, learn to use proper Indentation and double-spacing. Second, make sure to go back and see If you've made any spelling errors. And third, you have the option of making updates to stories---don't just automatically say a story is done when you can add new chapters to an existing story.
I'm hoping to see more in the future, hopefully it'll help me learn how to write a story of my own. Perhaps we can push ourselves into becoming better versed in the field of writing!
Well, I haven't really done anything to garner comments aside from editing your stories. I'm looking to expand my talents and edit for other authors (and man up and actually finish one of the five or so stories I'm juggling writing), but it's slow going.