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Dranlu


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If this story gets enough good feedback, i'm going to work on it a bit more and make a "Unchained" version, the scenes with the princesses would be much more intimate and the death/ torture scenes would be much much more graphic!:yay:

If you're really going... there... then maybe you should put on an 'Alternative Universe' tag?

CelestiaXLuna? Yay! Gore and death? ...Not yay.

Poor grammar and capitalization. Neigh.

1571355 yeah lol this was a creepy Halloween story that I wrote for a contest between me and a friend, I had a deadline so i didn't get to edit it to my full extent quite yet, but I figured it was readable at this point so I tossed it up ^.^ I'll work on all those mistakes as soon as I have time.:derpytongue2:

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You should. Gore is one thing. No audience enjoys poor grammar. :pinkiehappy:

RoseLuck you.........:flutterrage:

She set them up. :raritydespair:
But I enjoyed the goriness of the story. This is what I expect when I want gore in a story. :pinkiesmile:
(But in a way this was like a clopfic :rainbowhuh: )

Dude if this was clopfic I would so follow you..:pinkiehappy:

Princest is best cest. :yay:

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