I am the guy who writes the Equestrian-Marvel Universe. If you don't know what that is, take a look at The Iron Mare. Oh, and I write other things.
This story is a sequel to The Iron Mare
After a failed attempt to create the super-soldier serum, Fluttershy is faced with more anger issues and tries to find a way to stop this creature inside her. She will do what she can to stop this monster inside. But what about when a new monster tries to attack?
Based on the 2008 movie The Incredible Hulk.
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Well its not terrible, but I feel like you're sticking way too close to the movie plot.
4353117 I tend to do that to get a good start, then veer off from that with a few of my own ideas. Stick around and you'll see exactly where this ends up going.
4353532 Fair enough. I tend to do the same. Of course I always feel like I'm following the movie plot too closely. Might just be me.
When I heard zebra, I expected Zecora. You sir, have sort of deceived me.
Sparkle industries? I smell foreshadowing and a sequel...
5521187 And a bit of a reference back to the previous story. They run parallel-ish. But good call on the sequel.
5521771 i can see these kind of things coming.
interesting
scary
scary
Can't wait for the next chapter
6127426 I thought it might be useful.
Wonderful story mate! loved how flutters is finally able to let her anger cut loose for good purposes.
I wanna see the Avengers assemble!
4353117
WAY to close.
Also not only you write Superhero MLP stuff (which I've read and good job on those The InvincibleIronBrony) but you read them too huh? That's pretty cool.
hmm. This is getting somewhere.
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Indeed he has. He could have at least let it rhyme. And if that was too much of a hassle then instead having the zebra as the survivor, then get somebody else to be the survivor and cut down on the zebra's lines.
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Good. Good. Though I saw a few mistakes, it's pretty good. Can wait to read Iron Mare 2!