A detective with the help of a newly-turned werepony fights demons on Earth and a demonic realm.
It is my great conceit that I can write interesting stories for utter strangers and maybe sometime in the far far future get paid for it.
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The 'was' should be removed.
Needs a 'that'.
Broadly I recommend getting a proof-reader, There's a lot of minor phrasing and formatting errors.
Otherwise, an intriguing premise.
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Thanks.
I wish I could get one but it's very difficult to get one.
Especially for dark stories.
Also, some of the phrasing was my choice but maybe I'm wrong.
This story was run through the free version of Grammarly.
Thanks for catching the "was" issue.