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Caladis


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hi v:
i ship flurry and twilight :v
i'mma return to my cave now v:

11871228
That would be an interesting way for Shining to get out of his situation.

How is this foalcon? Flurry is 16

11871410
Americans consider anything under 18 to be foalcon.

11871446
Foalcon Characters are like the same ages as the cmc. Before they're teenagers

Flurry’s cheeks reddened and Shining cleared his throat. “I… umm… don’t think that came out the way I wanted it to.”

What if we got married? Just kidding. Unless...

Flurry should be motivated but hesitant to move on her dad I feel which is kind of what I'm getting from her. Shining the same way but even more hesitant, most of his motivation coming from the pressure of his family.

I wish I had ideas for dates. You probably remember how I used them all already.

11871451
I guess if it doesn't fit the criteria for foalcon I guess remove it from the folder. I just put the story into as many folders as I felt like it belonged to get the story more exposure and for proper labeling purposes. The story isn't likely to have sex it at all unless I get some good ideas from the people who comment. I'll be honest that I wasn’t expecting to defend her being too old.

11871456
If you come up with anything let me know.

sees rating increase over the sequels
Well then...

11871446
I mean yes
Though there are certain terms for it but to avoid the risk of sounding SUSPICIOUS AS TARTARUS im not gonna say

11871497
Yes. We wouldn't want anything taken out of context. In any event, I hope you like the story.

Good story! I love your writing style and i can't wait to see where it goes next!

11887560
Thank you for the reassurance. The lack of comments was making me think that the story was going in the wrong direction.

The only thing I don’t like is the time it takes for you to update this story I like the twist at the end and as far as my opinion goes I like the direction it’s going

11888579
I wish I could go faster but it's college finals time. Also, I got hung up on this chapter. I didn't want to write myself into a corner. Makes it hard to finish a story if you don't know how to move forward. Still, I'm glad your enjoying it.

11888597
Oh in that case take your time education takes priority good luck in which ever degree you’re pursuing

11888602
It's an Associate of Science with a Medical Focus. I plan to be a Nurse, X-Ray Tech or Lab Tech. I guess it'll depend on how well I do in Anatomy and Physiology I & II.

I like this twist because it's a better motive and makes more sense than Cadance just being hell bent on them doing it. Also I like how there's a commemorative plaque on the spot of Flurry's conception.

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