Good story! I love your writing style and i can't wait to see where it goes next!

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Thank you for the reassurance. The lack of comments was making me think that the story was going in the wrong direction.

The only thing I don’t like is the time it takes for you to update this story I like the twist at the end and as far as my opinion goes I like the direction it’s going

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I wish I could go faster but it's college finals time. Also, I got hung up on this chapter. I didn't want to write myself into a corner. Makes it hard to finish a story if you don't know how to move forward. Still, I'm glad your enjoying it.

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Oh in that case take your time education takes priority good luck in which ever degree you’re pursuing

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It's an Associate of Science with a Medical Focus. I plan to be a Nurse, X-Ray Tech or Lab Tech. I guess it'll depend on how well I do in Anatomy and Physiology I & II.

I like this twist because it's a better motive and makes more sense than Cadance just being hell bent on them doing it. Also I like how there's a commemorative plaque on the spot of Flurry's conception.