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Ackkenan234


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I would say, a good start. I'm looking forward to see what you do with it.

it seems like a good start, but... This is another attempt to write the long-suffering story of "The Unexpected Love Life of Dusk Shine".
Let's see if the curse of all her kind falls on this job.

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Original
attempt at reincarnation
attempt to reincarnate 2 + minor changes.
and these are just the stories I found when I searched for "the unexpected love life of Dusk Shine." If you analyze the entire range of PLOT stories about this character, the number of unfinished ones is simply depressing. Why am I talking about plot stories? because there is a whole mountain of porn with this character for different tastes and colors, and even it is not all completed, but with it the situation is somehow better. because quite often porn is one shot.

Well, as an introduction, it's not bad, although it remains to be seen if this fic doesn't join the list of incomplete or abandoned Dusk Shine fics.
It's even sad if you think about it

Cool start, but you'll forgive me if I'm praying that this doesn't join the graveyard of abandoned or unfinished Dusk Shine stories out there. I'm paranoid of good stories getting assassinated.

Is Spike also rule 63 into Barb or does he not exist in this story?

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Spike stay male as Dusk will probably be the only character to get their gender flipped

One of the most well-known sights in the city was the Canterlot Castle, besides the royal palace was the Grand School for Gifted Unicorns, personally funded by the Sun matriarch herself, it was home to many gifted and talented students over the years who would go on to do amazing things in the fielded of Magic and Alchemy. The campus was huge and sprawling, having been expanded numerous times since its inception. The main campus is a series of towers, connected by walkways, courtyards, and the like. Each tower has a different focus for the magic taught within, with the east wing of the campus being dedicated to the study of healing magic, while the west wing is home to the more offensive magics. The south wing is where the classrooms are, and the north is for the more advanced classes and laboratories, alongside an extensive library and other research facilities.

Awesome story, but shouldn't healing magic belong to the Earthborn (Earth ponies)

Great chapter. There are several parts of the story were a paragraph is repeated but otherwise great. I can't wait to see more to come and maybe see if Dusk's relationship with Celestia advance to a new stage. Maybe after his ascension?

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Where does it repeated? I’m editing this by myself so if I miss anything that why

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