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The March of Times Gratification

Luna is found fleeing the castle grounds unexpectedly and without any inform, Celestia chases by chance to see what is really going on for her to leave her post..

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Majestic_Donut #1 · March 2nd · 1 · ·

This was beautiful!!! Love seeing the Two Sisters being epic warriors of magic!!! Very well balanced too and they don't seem overly overpowered. Based on how they each took some injuries (that they were only able to heal because they're sisters and don't intend to actually kill each other) shows at least some vulnerability.

There were some grammar issues that could be fixed by going over it in a "read aloud" program of any kind, but other than that a great story! You get a like and fave