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It certainly has evolved, and it looks like the finale will be bigger than I can imagine.

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Thank you kindly. This is my first time writing anything in my life. Have you felt like the writing has evolved as the story has gone on? I do, but I do not know how exactly.
I benefit from having the entire story planned out. I wasn't sure if you hated the story for how tragic it is or loved to hate what was going on. Glad to hear you're enjoying it! Big things to come.

You've written a very good story. Celestia is a compelling tragic villain that is fun to hate and despise. Seeing her madness is a thrill, and we eagerly await her downfall