Marking the Generations – Part One

by Glimbursts

Epilogue

Opaline puffed and panted as she stood at the door to her castle. Yet another attempt at breaking the spell trapping her had failed. Eyes wide, she took a deep breath and thrust her head to the sky, letting out a cry of sheer anguish.

“Why? Why?” she panted. “My powers are back, I’m stronger than ever. Why can’t I break free?”

She turned around and re-entered the castle, still panting from the effort she’d expended.

Suddenly, a flash of green caught her eye. A vein of green shot through the tree growing through the castle from its roots to the very tip of its branches.

Excitedly, Opaline hurried to her caldron pool and cast the spell to bring up the map of Equestria. She waited with bated breath as her heart continued to pound. Finally, the map appeared and there was a flash as a whole new set of lines appeared around Zephyr Heights. Those around Maretime Bay also becoming more defined.

“Yes! Yes!” she cried with elation. “You beautiful Together Tree, you’ve made another new friend haven’t you? If only you’d make amends with that spiteful one in Bridlewood.”

She studied the map further and grinned with elation.

“Just you wait Sunny Starscout, Starlight Glimmer, Sunset Shimmer,” Opaline beamed. “As you make your own steps forward you progress my plans without even realising it. All I need is more power, then I’ll be free from this castle and free to take my rightful place at last.”

With that, Opaline let out a maniacal cackling laugh before promptly lying down, panting for breath.

“Just maybe after I’ve had a nap.”

Author's Note:

So that is the end of Part One but fear not as Part Two is well underway.

Comments

[Phetiamwantip]

Can't wait for part 2, I want to see Starlight teaching Misty magic and defeating Opaline. This is going to be super epic.

[Lex the Pikachu]

This was a nice reimagining. It needs a lot of work though. Lots of words throughout are wrong because they are missing letters or the wrong letters used, examples i've are "thought" when its meant to be "through" or "hay" when it meant to be "hey".

[Glimbursts]

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Thank you for the feedback.

I've gone through the whole thing again and picked out as many of those sorts of errors as I can spot. I suspect I'd have missed some so if anyone spots any more issues please do let me know.

[Glimbursts]

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Since posting this, I've gone through this part again and even more wrong words have been removed. I'm hoping that Part One will be all clear now.

Part Two will receive this next as I improved my proof reading methods between that and Part Three.

Part Four is due to release by the end of the Easter Weekend

[Draco Dei]

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Well..."hay" instead of "hey" is something I have intentional used myself as a Pony pun.
Other than that...