The Flying Unicorn

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The Flying Unicorn

They found the Hold, the source of the Predators.

The sealed it back up, but not without sacrifice.

They float between worlds, but not forever.

And they land somewhere else, in a place so far removed from what they know, yet eerily similar.

Oleander & Fred landing in Equestria, done for the Portal TF Contest 1.

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Ciphers

Ciphers #1 · February 26th · · ·

The Unicorn bit the inside of her cheek, seeming to debate answering, but Fred beat her to it; “ There’s a whole race of cursed spirits made into tangible beasts known as Predators, who were eventually sealed away by some weird giant Goat Prophet lady in the space between dimensions known as the Hold after snapping one of her horns off and turning it into a key. It wasn’t a permanent seal though, and eventually the Predators starting breaking out and into the world of Fœnum, which is where we are from, and after a lengthy discussion by a bunch of stuffy council members, they decided a group of Champions from separate nations should gather from all over the world to push back the Predators into the Hold. Only part of that actually happened, as the Champions were instead made up of a vain instigator, a useless dogsitter, a dumb kid, and a cute, yet brain-dead alpaca. Thankfully, there was also us , as well as a flaming Dragon-Horse hybrid known as a 龍馬 (Longma in English) who was actually capable of combat and strategy. And with the three of us, and the other buffoons, we managed to push those beasts back where they came from, and we all learned some important like lessons along the way. Hooray, insert cheery song and credits roll here. However, instead of simply being able to just close the bloody door to the Hold, there was a final, massive Predator that we all had to work together to deal with—one that we had to deal with by... pushing it inside and keeping it there, with the Longma closing the door behind us, leaving us both suspending in an eternal expanse of nothingness for however long before we fell through another exit into this world (which may or may not be the same one, but in all likelihood isn’t ), where we woke up on a beach like all those other stories about random Ungulates/Ponies/Creatures/Humans/Pokémon showing up out of nowhere and knowing nothing about the current world we’re in. ”

the Predators actually normal animal like everyone, but all get lock down. While having escaped The Hold, the Predators are still trapped in the void between realms and thus cannot physically interact with the inhabitants of Fœnum. Instead, they appear as abstract ghosts.

“I know such a ‘diplomatic’ and ‘optimistic’ Ungulate such as yourself despises communism and the rule of Empires, but...” The Unicorn trailed off for a moment, then just rolled her eyes and scoffed, “Her subjects are happy and safe; pirates have been trying to penetrate their capital to steal things for centuries , and they’ve succeeded maybe only three times in total. She’s devoted herself to her Empire, even stripping herself of her name, and...” She tilted her head just slightly, pensive, but confident, “Yet, I’ve never heard her be described as exhausted in any capacity. Not by those who’ve fought her, tried to flee from her, nor even her closest subordinates; no, instead she’s always lively and calm, the perfect picture of who she ought to be in spite of every reason to be otherwise.”

Communism and Rule of Empires? Holy shit Blessed MonSoc gang

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #2 · February 26th · · ·

Hmmm. Is this connected to the previous Thwm's Fightin Herd's?

Oh wait nvm. Fred is the demon.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #3 · February 26th · · ·

Overall, she looked less like an elegant and magical Unicorn, and more like that tiny and dumb calf she had just fought alongside.

And I thought you all became friends in the end.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #4 · February 26th · · ·

Soon enough, Oleander was heaving out exhausted breaths, sweat trickling down across her coat while the Sun continued to beam down on her, it having only risen further into the sky as she trotted on, occasionally glancing down at her hooves to make sure she didn’t trip over herself yet again. Around her stood massive buildings, their walls made mostly of windows as they stretched dozens of stories upward, only reflecting more light down onto the stone roads below.

Manehatten?

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #5 · February 26th · · ·

The necklace of the amulet snapped, and its magic shattered, the darkness blasting off of the Pegasus, ripping through space around her as its effects became undone; from the point the amulet rested against Golden Feather’s chest, malachite flames swiftly tore across her coat, burning off the false fur to reveal the true pearlescent colour underneath, and as the flames made their way to her wings in a split-second, her feathers changed colours as well, though the wings themselves got stretched outward into an expansive pair that extended past the Pony’s body.

The Pony’s actual body held more revelations as well, with her ‘Cutie Mark’ losing the pair of sunglasses to become a pure Sun, and her legs below lengthen in a similar way to her wings, forcing the Pony herself to stand up nearly twice the height of all other Ponies around her. Her head also changed, with her muzzle lengthening somewhat and her mane burning off to become a pastel rainbow that wafted off of her, but most notable of all, a horn sprouted out of her forehead in a long, yet straight spiral.

Celestia!!?

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #6 · February 26th · · ·

I want you to continue this storyline. I'm interested to see where Oleander will go in her journey and how she wil learn things of Equestria.

Baroque

Baroque #7 · March 3rd · · ·

Hoooo boy! I sure hope you'll continue this story, I really like the concept of it!
:D

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