I honestly didn't hate it up until the ending. I loved the whole Pinkamena "Cupcakes"-esque gore, and I actually really liked that it turned out to be a nightmare trip from pizza mushrooms of all things. I think stopping it there would have been a better, in-character ending than having Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle actually fucking Anon. But I actually enjoyed reading it a bit. I'll look out for your other stuff in the future~

I feel like i went through the 5 stages of emotions throughout all that. Clear warnings were said so knowing what to expect helps. Weird start with good foreshadowing. Certainly felt like I was walking through that dream as Anon in the second chapter. The visuals, shock, gore, and more was down right terrifying. Incorporating both chaotic normal Pinkie, and psychotic Cupcake Pinkie in the same story was very well done.

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Thank you. It's not easy to pull off that balance.

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Thank you. This was the darkest story I've ever attempted and in all honesty, I might not have included the current ending if I wanted this to be a one shot, but I was hoping to create an opening for a New Year's themed sequel. Honest criticism is always welcome.

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I see! If you do release a New Years sequel, I'll be sure to be on the lookout :)

I'd love a new years sequel of this, I'm a huge fan of your interpretation of equestrian relationships

i LOLed.

was tripping balls

were

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Fixed! Thank you for the comment.

That was a fucking trip. Pun intended. I impatiently await part 2.

I should have recognized something was going on with the mushrooms, I legitimately said to myself oh boy special mushrooms huh I bet I know what they're used for with pinkie pie
this was a very interesting story I wonder if there will be a sequel.

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I am planning a sequel but I have two commissions lined up that have to take priority. The title I plan to use for the sequel is 'Happy Fucking New Year' so be on the lookout for it.

Well, surprised that Flurry was not in the menu in the end, I guess Pinkie did not manage to convince Shining Armor?

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Spoilers, I guess, but saving it for the sequel.