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Postwarmonkey50

I'm a man who loves stories, and I love getting into them. They inspire me to be a writer.

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Darth_krayt
Darth_krayt #1 · Dec 30th, 2023 · · · A flower from within the wall ·
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It appears it was Destiny for them to meet now we have to see where this goes

shining paladin
shining paladin #2 · Dec 30th, 2023 · · · A flower from within the wall ·
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sunflowers are my favorite flowers and they are the national flower of Ukraine great start mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

PonyFan1010
PonyFan1010 #3 · Dec 30th, 2023 · · · A flower from within the wall ·
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Is this going to be a hot AND heartwarming story? Because if is,I'm all for it,as long as it's well balanced.

shining paladin
shining paladin #6 · January 3rd · · · Planting the seeds of the future ·
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awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter when he and wallflower share their feelings for each other this soundtrack came to me:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

shining paladin
shining paladin #8 · January 3rd · · · Planting the seeds of the future ·
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Sunflowers are the national flower of Ukraine:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

shining paladin
shining paladin #10 · January 16th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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great story mate keep it up cant wait for next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

RainbowRaptorDash1
RainbowRaptorDash1 #11 · March 28th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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You continued to look into her eyes whilst you couldn’t help but stroke her hair as you continued to look at her. The two of you began to press your lips towards one another, whilst making out with one another with great compassion. You ended up moving backwards, with her following suit. You ended up sitting down on the bed, with you being on the bed and Wallflower sitting on your lap while your lips were still on hers. You then slowly lifted her sweater and shirt up, whilst she temporarily broke the kiss. The moment it was removed, she ended up removing your shirt as well, causing the two of you to engage with your lips once more.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #12 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862731
Uh... What did you want to ask?

RainbowRaptorDash1
RainbowRaptorDash1 #13 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862734
I'm actually pointing out some grammar right now.

RainbowRaptorDash1
RainbowRaptorDash1 #15 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862740
Look here.

You continued to look into her eyes whilst you couldn’t help but stroke her hair as you continued to look at her. The two of you began to press your lips towards one another, whilst making out with one another with great compassion. You ended up moving backwards, with her following suit. You ended up sitting down on the bed, with you being on the bed and Wallflower sitting on your lap while her lips were still on hers. You then slowly lifted her sweater and shirt up, whilst she temporarily broke the kiss. The moment it was removed, she ended up removing your shirt as well, causing the two of you to engage with your lips once more.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #16 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862742
Hey, if there was an issue, my auto correct would've picked it up.

And second, if it's such a train smash, would you demonstrate what it's supposed to be rather than that.

RainbowRaptorDash1
RainbowRaptorDash1 #17 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862744
"while her lips were still on hers."
"while your lips were still on hers."

See the difference?

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #18 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862748
:facehoof:Now I see it.

I've been working on that story for so long, I keep mixing first and third person view.

RainbowRaptorDash1
RainbowRaptorDash1 #19 · March 29th · · · Love is in Bloom ·
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11862750
Hey, it's okay, Postwar. We all make mistakes from time to time.

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