During your travels, you meet a girl who loves plants as much as you do.
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great story mate keep it up cant wait for next story
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Uh... What did you want to ask?
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I'm actually pointing out some grammar right now.
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I don't see anything wrong.
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Look here.
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Hey, if there was an issue, my auto correct would've picked it up.
And second, if it's such a train smash, would you demonstrate what it's supposed to be rather than that.
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"while her lips were still on hers."
"while your lips were still on hers."
See the difference?
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Now I see it.
I've been working on that story for so long, I keep mixing first and third person view.
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Hey, it's okay, Postwar. We all make mistakes from time to time.